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A Father's Love

You grieved his soul when you stormed out that day; Such vitriol re-echoed in your wake. To spurn a father’s love and walk away Was more than his poor aching heart could take. You squandered his benevolence in vain For passing pleasures brought no lasting joy, Regarded his wise counsel with disdain A libertine existence to employ. And yet he always spoke of you with love Forgiving your imperious self-pride, You were the vulture, he a turtle-dove Hoping with fervent prayer you’d turn the tide. Your name was murmoured in his parting sigh; How tragic that you never said good-bye. 30/08/18 'Sour grapes contest' sponsored by Mark Massey September Premiere 2018,Any Form,Any Theme,Upto A Max Of 20 Lines Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Date: 10/10/2018 8:05:00 AM
Wow, Wendy. A strong poem. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 10/9/2018 2:46:00 PM
Yes, so tragic when a family is divided, thank you for submitting it to my contest-
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Wendy Watson
Date: 10/9/2018 3:02:00 PM
Thank you for giving the poem another look, Michelle. It was a lovely idea for a contest.
Date: 8/31/2018 12:03:00 PM
A well written piece Wendy. Sounds like the prodigal son that never came back. I hope that it is just fiction. As always an enjoyable read. I've been doing some dark poetry recently, check one out when you get a chance.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 10/9/2018 3:05:00 PM
Hello,Charles. A very belated thank you for your kind words and yes, thankfully it's not something I've encountered in my personal experience. Best wishes Wendy

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