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A Father Is - For Contest

A father is…. ….that grouchy, cursing guy who just banged his head on the cabinet door getting under the sink to fix a leak …that “voice” resounding off the walls singing – off key, talking to the dog, whispering “I love you’s” to sleeping children. …that firm hand patting you on the back when deserved, a bit lower at times also when deserved. …he is that “look” that can inflate, or deflate, you amuse and confuse you, stop you in your tracks to ponder – “why” …he is the ears that don’t seem to be listening, yet hear everything …the eyes that don’t seem to be looking but see “you” when you can’t see yourself A father is “that wry smile” that grin that says “I love you” without words. 5/19/2016 submitted to – A Father is…- Poetry Contest sponsor – Brenda Chiri-Carroll

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Date: 6/3/2016 7:01:00 AM
Greetings John. Congrats for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!! ;-)
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John Lawless
Date: 6/3/2016 11:29:00 AM
Thanks Teddy
Date: 5/29/2016 4:40:00 PM
Oh John, this magnificent poem brought tears to my eyes. It is so brilliantly written I would have it at the top with Joyce's. It is going straight into my faves! I don't think you could have written it better! Congratulations on your most deserving win! #7 + ; )
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John Lawless
Date: 6/3/2016 11:27:00 AM
Thank you Connie....a fav and a 7+. All for just being there whenever they whispered or cried DAD!!
Date: 5/29/2016 11:58:00 AM
A favorite for me. Loved it
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John Lawless
Date: 6/3/2016 11:25:00 AM
Thank you Shirley for stopping by to read and comment
Date: 5/28/2016 10:33:00 PM
I see what kind of a father you are :-) great write congratulations on your win!
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John Lawless
Date: 6/3/2016 11:25:00 AM
Eve, my son recently asked me to be the best man at his wedding. I asked him "why me?" and he replied "because you're the best man I know." I guess I got some of it right
Date: 5/28/2016 7:24:00 PM
A great poem. I like your father if this is his description Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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John Lawless
Date: 6/3/2016 11:22:00 AM
Joyce, I think this is more of a hope that this is the way my children see me. Thanks for stopping by to read and comment.
Date: 5/28/2016 2:35:00 PM
John, amazing and beautiful... Congratulations. Linda
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John Lawless
Date: 6/3/2016 11:20:00 AM
Thanks PD always nice to hear from you
Date: 5/28/2016 10:15:00 AM
Such wonderful 'snapshot' images of the life of a devoted father, John. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra
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John Lawless
Date: 6/3/2016 11:19:00 AM
well, Sandra, at times the children weren't sure if I was "devoted or deranged". Thanks for your support
Date: 5/19/2016 12:12:00 PM
You've captured all there is to a father her,lovely John!
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John Lawless
Date: 6/3/2016 11:16:00 AM
Yes, Sara, and I'm perfecting it in being a grandfather...x3

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