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A Farewell Poem.

My love for you is not dying but getting stronger, Waiting for you takes longer and longer, No matter how many days go by, I think of you while looking at the open sky, Oh how I wish you were here with me, All I need is for you to come and see, Nothing is happening while waiting for you, I know we sometimes regret the things we say and do, Why oh why must I wait for you to notice, I am changing blooming into a beautiful lotus, I want you here, So you can whisper in my ear, My love is not leaving, But a burden that is grieving, Seeing me fly by, I go with that look in your eyes, Goodbye my love, I just want to give one last hug, When you see me lying dead in that floor, Please oh please love me no more.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/2/2009 6:08:00 PM
very beautiful. do not let this be the last. you have talent. and someone else will find you like i did. keep useing the pain to write beautiful things. because listen whwn it's gone it's gone. John Henry Loving III going to my fav list.
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Date: 12/1/2009 3:58:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Shannon. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/29/2009 9:49:00 PM
First off thank you for being such a fan and that comment you made.I am going to send you a soup mail in a minute.
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