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A Familiar Song of Home

The morning sun wakes me with old songs My open window invites them in Tho' eyes are closed, I see the place where doves called my name
__ Inspired By Joann Grisetti's Contest: "Shanzi"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/26/2012 5:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joann's "Shanzi" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/22/2012 10:23:00 AM
Carrie, congrats on your win, a great image portrayed...David
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Date: 7/22/2012 9:42:00 AM
Beautiful! Congratulations again!
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Date: 7/22/2012 9:28:00 AM
A beautiful image, Carrie! Congrats on your wonderful win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 7/21/2012 3:12:00 PM
((()))Congrats on your winning work..Enjoyed reading..Sara
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Date: 7/21/2012 8:02:00 AM
Congrats on your win Carrie!Loved it first time around.
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Date: 7/21/2012 5:20:00 AM
congrats Carrie on an amazing second place win for this lovely poem in Shanzi form.. feeling the beauty of this write luv..
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Date: 7/21/2012 1:13:00 AM
lovely......well done again Carrie !
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Date: 7/20/2012 5:14:00 PM
Those doves called me, too. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/16/2012 10:59:00 AM
Amazing.........Love it Carrie!
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Date: 7/14/2012 8:16:00 PM
Hi Carrie...I feel the serenity in your Verse. i enjoyed reading this, and so will Joann, I'm sure. I hope you're enjoying summer. Love, Annalise
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