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A Fall Tanka

Crisp air thin and dry Snuggles under covers sweet Giggles and tickles Fall into love once more dear Sprinkle love like leaves aground

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/4/2012 1:34:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Great one that I knew was a winner..Mom

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/4/2012 10:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your super win Doris. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/4/2012 10:43:00 AM

congrats Doris on winning an HM for this excellent Tanka..luv..

Rhia Madison Thomer

Date: 12/16/2010 8:53:00 AM

this was a beautiful piece! I loves the images and thoughts presented here. The last two lines were my absolute favorites. Beautifully penned. This is going into my favorites collection. thank you for this and your kind comments. --madison

David Smalling

Date: 11/16/2010 10:40:00 AM

Love is never new, Doris, it is always in the heart, but it finds new languages to surprise us ... like a poem tickling joy. One love

Eamon Duffin

Date: 11/4/2010 8:50:00 AM

Hi Doris. Loved this. As others have said, the last line grabs the heart. I have a lot to learn. Best of luck in contest. Thank you, Eamon

Diane Locksley

Date: 10/29/2010 11:19:00 AM

This is a precious tanka, Doris. Good luck in the contest! Diane

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/29/2010 10:12:00 AM

This is very sweet, Doris. good luck in the contest. LUv, Andrea

James Gibbons

Date: 10/29/2010 7:03:00 AM

Dear Doris, very sweet and sublimely captures childhood innocence. Thanks for your kind comments re "Fair Morning" Jim Gibbons

Deb Wilson

Date: 10/28/2010 5:54:00 PM

beautiful! Good luck to you in contest..take care~Deb

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/28/2010 3:03:00 PM

Good luck with this well written one..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for taking the time to stop by, read, and comment..Have you heard from Charlie and Jordan..Mom

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/28/2010 11:51:00 AM

Beautiful write you got here Doris. It's almost weekend ;)

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/28/2010 8:28:00 AM

Im going back to bed after reading this one..sweet write. BG

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/28/2010 8:19:00 AM

crisp and tingling imagery, doris.. what a wonder! good luck in the contest.. warmest, nette