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A Fall Tanka

Crisp air thin and dry
Snuggles under covers sweet
Giggles and tickles
Fall into love once more dear
Sprinkle love like leaves aground

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Sara Kendrick

March 4, 2012 at 1:34 PM

Congrats on your win..Great one that I knew was a winner..Mom

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 4, 2012 at 10:56 AM

Congratulations on your super win Doris. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 4, 2012 at 10:43 AM

congrats Doris on winning an HM for this excellent Tanka..luv..

Rhia Madison Thomer

December 16, 2010 at 8:53 AM

this was a beautiful piece! I loves the images and thoughts presented here. The last two lines were my absolute favorites. Beautifully penned. This is going into my favorites collection. thank you for this and your kind comments. --madison

David Smalling

November 16, 2010 at 10:40 AM

Love is never new, Doris, it is always in the heart, but it finds new languages to surprise us ... like a poem tickling joy. One love

Eamon Duffin

November 4, 2010 at 8:50 AM

Hi Doris. Loved this. As others have said, the last line grabs the heart. I have a lot to learn. Best of luck in contest. Thank you, Eamon

Diane Locksley

October 29, 2010 at 11:19 AM

This is a precious tanka, Doris. Good luck in the contest! Diane

Andrea Dietrich

October 29, 2010 at 10:12 AM

This is very sweet, Doris. good luck in the contest. LUv, Andrea

James Gibbons

October 29, 2010 at 7:03 AM

Dear Doris, very sweet and sublimely captures childhood innocence. Thanks for your kind comments re "Fair Morning" Jim Gibbons

Deb Wilson

October 28, 2010 at 5:54 PM

beautiful! Good luck to you in contest..take care~Deb

Sara Kendrick

October 28, 2010 at 3:03 PM

Good luck with this well written one..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for taking the time to stop by, read, and comment..Have you heard from Charlie and Jordan..Mom