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a fall hiku

inhaling brightness while tasting sunset’s breeze . . . caressed by fall’s bliss

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Date: 6/14/2025 9:30:00 PM
Lovely! Like the opening especially -
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Date: 6/14/2025 9:10:00 PM
An energizing haiku.Inhaling the sweet air of fall is a pleasurable experience too. Congratulations Andrea on your top win.
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Date: 6/14/2025 6:09:00 PM
This thrills the senses, Andrea! Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 6/14/2025 2:18:00 PM
Lovely! Congrats!^___^
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Date: 6/14/2025 9:18:00 AM
Nicely written by a pen filled with beauty as its ink. Congrats.
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Date: 6/14/2025 9:09:00 AM
This is beautiful Andrea! Congratulations
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Date: 6/14/2025 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations poet friend on your top win in Brian`s contest with a flowing write inhaling brightness of the fall. Wishing you a bright weekend.
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Date: 6/14/2025 1:18:00 AM
Dear Andrea, excellent haiku. Have a lovely weekend.
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Date: 6/13/2025 8:42:00 PM
So calm and soothing my dear poet friend Andrea! Thanks a lot for sharing this stellar haiku! Best winning wishes! Thanks a lot also for your loving visit on my old & latest poems. So much appreciated. God bless you always. Hugs..Soupmail 4U.
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Date: 6/13/2025 5:10:00 PM
brilliant haiku, loved the sonorities too
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Date: 6/13/2025 2:10:00 PM
ahhh - now that's imagery, tied up and delivered just right. YES! Poetry hugs ... CayCay (Not Four Letter Words).. so silly
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Date: 6/13/2025 12:25:00 PM
What a creative/colorful "a fall hiku" write you have here. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a lovely day writing away...............
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Date: 6/13/2025 12:19:00 PM
- Don't know why... but it made me think of fresh squeezed orange juice ... color and taste... lovely ku, Andrea :) - hugs
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Date: 6/13/2025 11:49:00 AM
Loveliness, dear poetess!
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Date: 6/13/2025 10:25:00 AM
Oh, how wonderful it is to read your haiku. Hi, Andrea :) ?? This poem reminds me of my Bright Orange cat Amarillo. He's warm like the sun & fresh like fall. Too bad I have cat allergies. I can't cuddle him, however I can look at him and tease him. Such a joyful poem. Nice imagery. Always PD. ~Linda~
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Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 6/13/2025 2:42:00 PM
So nice to read you :-)

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