A Fairy Tale of Romance - Story Poem

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Poem written - 11th July 2023

Write a Story Poem Contest

Sponsored by: Joanna Daniel

Once upon a dreamy fairy tale night Two lover's hearts went soaring off in flight The setting a magical seaside scene Enchanting beauty befitting a queen. Fairies gathered to gaze from on a star For romance delighted their tiny hearts So enthralling was this mystical sight They sprinkled their fairy dust o'er the night. Sequin-silver jewels enhanced night sky Twinkling on the sea as waves rippled by Soft golden sand cushioned the lovers feet As they strolled along the crescent shaped beach. Only sound was the opera of sea A soothing oceanic melody The summer breeze caressed their sun kissed skin Just as their rendezvous was to begin. He took her in his arms and held her tight Whispered "darling you look lovely tonight" In a tender moment of bliss they kissed Pledging their love would stay a lifelong tryst. They danced merrily in splendour of sea For today they joined in matrimony.

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Terry Flood

Date: 7/25/2023 3:37:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Belle, with this poem that proves romance is not dead… just busily washing sand from just about everywhere… darn it… I didn’t mean to lower the tone. ;-) seriously though, a smashing write and a well deserved win. Terry

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/26/2023 1:42:00 AM

Ha! washing sand from everywhere, those were the days my friend :) Thanks for the congratulations and delightful comments Terry… Belle

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/25/2023 9:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful write/story/ending you have here. Lovely... Have a great day.....................

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/25/2023 11:54:00 AM

Thank you Paula, have a great day too… Belle

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/25/2023 6:01:00 AM

Big story. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/25/2023 11:53:00 AM

Thank you very much Christuraj… Belle

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/25/2023 1:29:00 AM

Great romantic story, Belle, congratulations:)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/25/2023 1:34:00 AM

Thank you Jo… Belle

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/15/2023 10:26:00 AM

Hi Belle we must be on a similar wave length between your pond and mine. Mine isn't for the competition but it is a narrative, story, love poem. LOVED IT. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, JENNIFER.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/16/2023 8:31:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer, will go right away to read your poem. Blessings and hugs in return ~ Belle