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A Fairy Fun Day

Where mountains fade to valley shade And trees give way to meadow's blade Cottony cattail, wild lilies teem Obscuring an enchanted stream Tis there amongst the grassland rue This tiny fairy village grew I will not say just where they stay And risk perchance they fly away It was by chance or happenstance We crashed a friendly fairy dance We got derailed and left the trail Looking for some swallowtails Can you imagine our surprise Fairies dancing with butterflies They welcomed us and made a fuss We danced with them and gained their trust Our day was done, we'd had our fun We said "goodbye" thanked every one Then headed back to find our trail Took home with us, this fairy tale.

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Date: 12/24/2023 10:13:00 PM
Daniel, congratulations on your win. Have a Merry Christmas.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 12/25/2023 6:45:00 AM
Thank you so much, Eve. A very Merry Christmas to you sweet lady:)
Date: 12/24/2023 7:19:00 AM
Back with warmest congratulations my dear friend! May you always dance with the butterflies! :)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 12/25/2023 6:44:00 AM
Thank you, Alice. Merry Christmas!
Date: 12/23/2023 11:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a fun write/story. Love It... Have A Very Blessed Christmas..................
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Daniel Turner
Date: 12/23/2023 12:19:00 PM
Thank you, Paula. Great to see you again. Merry Christmas:)
Date: 12/13/2023 2:29:00 AM
Awwn, I loved reading this 'Fairy Fun day' tale, so exquisitely crafted with beautiful storytelling.. It has created a magical and jolly ambience in my heart with its iridescent wordplay. Truly an enchanting delight for the soul! "Fairies dancing with butterflies" Oh my, how adorable!!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 12/13/2023 3:48:00 AM
Thank you, Hiya. I really appreciate your time and support. Merry Christmas, young lady:)
Date: 12/5/2023 1:17:00 PM
Oh I absolutely love this Daniel! A enchanting fairy tale and all wrapped up in perfect rhyme. This one is a Huge fav for me and just what I needed to read today. Thank you for writing this beautiful, fun uplifting poem. Big smiles ~ Anne :-)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 12/8/2023 1:12:00 AM
Thank you, Anne. I appreciate your kind words of support. Merry Christmas:)
Date: 12/5/2023 5:54:00 AM
Delightful one, Daniel: Wished I had been there with you. Love this magical story. Just me, a kid at heart. SuZ
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Daniel Turner
Date: 12/5/2023 11:14:00 AM
Hi SuZ! I guess I am too, a little anyway. The great escape! So nice to see you. I hope life is treating you well:)
Date: 12/5/2023 3:05:00 AM
Good Morning Daniel. Hi. How adorable is this entry. Very. It is a feel good entry to the eye and soul. I for one love the concept of fairies and butterflies. We envision the dance. This was a wonderful way to start the day. Have a great morning and day. May the fairy tale last... Peace and Blessings always. (smile)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 12/5/2023 11:13:00 AM
Thank you young lady:) We write our own story... I choose make believe:) Be well and take care!
Date: 11/29/2023 7:33:00 PM
Fairy Fun, Fairy Funny, or Funny Fair -- however, you slice it, I really like it, Daniel. :) gw
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Daniel Turner
Date: 12/5/2023 11:12:00 AM
Hello GW! Thanks buddy. Always glad to see you my friend.
Date: 11/27/2023 6:26:00 PM
I like your poem. I like the light fairy-tale quality
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Daniel Turner
Date: 12/5/2023 11:11:00 AM
Thank you, Hilda. Imagination is a wonderful thing-at any age. LOL
Date: 11/27/2023 6:15:00 PM
Danny, this is absolutely delightful--skillfully composed also. Janice
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Daniel Turner
Date: 12/5/2023 11:10:00 AM
Thank you, Janice:) Im glad you liked it. Hoping you are well sweet lady:)
Date: 11/27/2023 3:48:00 PM
This is wonderfully fantastical. Love the butterflies dancing with fairies.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 11/27/2023 4:31:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! I was feeling a little childish, I guess. Great to see you. Did you have a big Thanksgiving with your family?
Date: 11/27/2023 7:01:00 AM
What fun Daniel! Love following the swallowtails. Alice :)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 11/27/2023 9:51:00 AM
LOL Hi Alice. Imagination is a great thing:) Happy to see you. Be well sweetie:)
Date: 11/26/2023 5:10:00 PM
It turned out to be a delightful group of verses, Danny.
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/26/2023 5:51:00 PM
;-)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 11/26/2023 5:21:00 PM
Thank you. It took a while to get them lined out. Thank fully I have a friend that helps me when I ask:)
Date: 11/26/2023 11:22:00 AM
thank you for inviting us to join you in this fairy village, daniel! this is a most delightful poem and i especially love the 3rd verse...
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Daniel Turner
Date: 11/26/2023 5:20:00 PM
Thank you, Ilene:) Im glad you liked my rhyme. I appreciate your kind words of support.
Date: 11/26/2023 8:35:00 AM
Sweet, lovely enchanting and inviting ! I want to come along on the next fairy adventure with you ! Hugs and Happy Thanksgiving to all dear Daniel . Susan :)
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 11/26/2023 8:58:00 AM
Thanks Daniel … A smile is a gift for sure . I smile inside when I read your poem . Closing my eyes now as I enter the fairy kingdom ! :)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 11/26/2023 8:37:00 AM
LOL Thank you, Susan. All you have to do is close your eyes and make believe and you will be right there with us:) I enjoy your visits, Susan. You always leave a smile:)
Date: 11/26/2023 8:24:00 AM
You take the reader to the realms of fantasy Daniel, a lovely story for children and of course the child in us all. Tom
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Daniel Turner
Date: 11/26/2023 8:36:00 AM
Thank you, Tom. What would life be like if we had no imagination? Always happy to see you. I hope your back gets well soon.
Date: 11/25/2023 8:17:00 PM
Love the whimsical rhyming and wonderful flow to this poem. hugs my friend
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Daniel Turner
Date: 11/26/2023 8:34:00 AM
Thank you, Eve. For your next book:) Great to see you sweet friend.
Date: 11/25/2023 4:49:00 PM
A fun fantasy piece. Bravo!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 11/26/2023 8:33:00 AM
Thank you, Richard. Great to see you again. It's been a while. Hoping you and yours are well:)
Date: 11/25/2023 2:12:00 PM
Awww this is so lovely and magical Daniel….perfect for a child's book….Do you have grandchildren? Debx
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Deb M
Date: 11/25/2023 2:53:00 PM
You're welcome YM….l know you love a nice bunch of roses! Hehe! YL x
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Daniel Turner
Date: 11/25/2023 2:18:00 PM
Yes, he is staying here now. Thank you for stopping by to deliver the flowers, YL. Take care and be well!
Date: 11/25/2023 2:00:00 PM
A very, fairy tale with fairy dances, in fairyland. A light hearted tale. Fun to escape into fantasy once in a while. Nice Daniel.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 11/25/2023 2:10:00 PM
Thank you, Sandy. It beats reality! Always a pleasure young lady. Take care:)

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