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A Fairy-Like Mind

Sure love eating, can't wait for dinnertime In my psyche, eating food is deeply enshrined Trying to eat less Difficult at best Just fading away in my fairy-like mind

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/17/2017 6:34:00 PM

How is your diet going?

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/17/2017 8:27:00 PM

I am happy for you you have worked hard.

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/17/2017 7:12:00 PM

Good good good news!!! Goes in increments of about 4 pounds... at 203, next one will take me under 200!!! YEEHAW!!! xxx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 9/17/2017 8:56:00 AM

The more I eat less, the less I eat more//I find it much easier to breach any door//I once was thick//now I'm a stick//and I don't line up for seconds no more! FADE ON JACKSON!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/17/2017 9:06:00 AM

I remember those plumpy days!!! That's the past... NEVER AGAIN!!! Have a good 'un JJ!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/17/2017 7:12:00 AM

I've got a Limerick for you...check out my Pigs Sty poem!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/17/2017 7:43:00 AM

Will do...

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/17/2017 6:42:00 AM

Don't go and eat too little, not having the nutrients you need for daily living isn't good either, you must have a good balance, which is hard to achieve, if only we all could get that! You write is surely well balanced however! I thoroughly enjoyed reading your illustrious poem here this morning! You have brought to me a smile with this funny piece, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/17/2017 6:49:00 AM

Belong to a site that's keeping me on track... no worries! CHEERS!!!