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A Dream

Sunset Just sitting a watching Everything so beautiful the wind blowing in my face Ocean wave crashing up onto the sand Everything is perfect I am finally happy And then I wake up Everything is gone I am all alone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/28/2011 9:35:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Brianna. I will be back again to read more. Please continue to write and share your poetry with us. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/22/2011 9:08:00 AM
hmmmmm sad.....nice imagery
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Date: 4/21/2011 8:10:00 PM
super dreamy .. yes sad that we have to wake up.. enjoyed,..p.d.
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