A Dream

Sunset 
Just sitting a watching 
Everything so beautiful
the wind blowing in my face 
Ocean wave crashing up onto the sand
Everything is perfect
I am finally happy
And then I wake up 
Everything is gone 
I am all alone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 28, 2011 at 9:35 AM
Enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Brianna. I will be back again to read more. Please continue to write and share your poetry with us. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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April 22, 2011 at 9:08 AM
hmmmmm sad.....nice imagery
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April 21, 2011 at 8:10 PM
super dreamy .. yes sad that we have to wake up.. enjoyed,..p.d.
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