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In my mind, God was but a distant dream, nowhere to be seen, and yet, everywhere. A bedtime story, with a feel-good theme, spread by religion through fear and prayer. I gave little credence to the thought that a bridge o'er troubled waters could be real. For life's always used me as a doormat, destined to squirm under a bully's heel. After years of denial, I found faith, Jesus entered my heart for the first time. And the presence of this spectral wraith, brought me hope that slowed anxiety's climb. It took me a lifetime to figure out if God exists, but now, I have no doubt. (Sonnet) 05/13/2020 Bridge over troubled waters Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John Hamilton

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Date: 6/8/2020 8:19:00 AM
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Date: 6/8/2020 9:24:00 AM
Thanks Christopher, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/27/2020 9:56:00 PM
Such a wonderful poem!
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Date: 5/28/2020 9:23:00 AM
Thanks Estela, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/27/2020 8:33:00 PM
Love this one Emile. A great journey and finding the truth in the end. Exceptional piece my friend...
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Date: 5/28/2020 9:23:00 AM
Thanks Michael. I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/26/2020 10:22:00 AM
Nice to see this climbing the top 100, a very beautiful write Emile!
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Date: 5/26/2020 11:42:00 AM
Thanks John, I appreciate you wonderful comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/24/2020 3:09:00 PM
Emile, The collision between Religion and intellect need not draw a line in the sand. Faith based ideology is not meant to close any doors.,rather allows the human spirit to boundless places. -Richard
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Date: 5/24/2020 4:00:00 PM
Thanks Richard, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/21/2020 1:58:00 PM
To have such belief sets you free. This is a very beautiful sonnet Emile. I was fortunate to learn this from birth. Congratulations on your wonderful win my friend! blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/21/2020 2:16:00 PM
Thank you Connie, blessings to you my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/21/2020 12:10:00 AM
Coming back to congratulate you on your splendid win Emile :)
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Date: 5/21/2020 8:57:00 AM
Thanks Aditi, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/20/2020 3:53:00 PM
What a wonderful write Emile, it is a sudden wonderment when we finally accept God's existence, even more when we comprehend the majesty of his love for us. Another stellar write worthy of a fine 2nd place!
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Date: 5/20/2020 7:13:00 PM
Thanks John, I appreciate the placement my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/14/2020 1:44:00 AM
What a beautiful acknowledgment of the faith that keeps us going! At some point of our lives, we all have experienced this I guess, denying the presence of God and faith and then being wrapped around it only to find it within ourselves. God bless you Emile :)
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Date: 5/14/2020 9:50:00 AM
Thanks so much Aditi, your words have touched my heart my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/13/2020 5:48:00 PM
Yay, Emile! My dad would say how come those things don’t happen to me. Because you have to step into faith first. God gives in all the little and big things! God bless, my sweet friend!
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Date: 5/14/2020 9:49:00 AM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your thoughts my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/13/2020 2:42:00 PM
What a wonderful poem, Emile! How many of us have been down the same road? Many, too many. Years of living with no faith, but you found Him. Awesome. It's very "in" and slick to be anything but a Christian now! A FAV for me. Panagiota xxoo
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Date: 5/14/2020 9:49:00 AM
Thanks Panagiota, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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