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A Disobedient Conscious

Questioning the darkest hour, Forgetting the corruptive power. Seen only at the bottom of the sea, or in the next galaxy. Don't know where to turn, Sensing your stomach burn. Your conscious doesn't want to obey. Will you stay or die? A fountain of tears to cry, But no goodbye. The maze A secret gaze Transformation phase All take days To forget about, And to remember, When it's oblivious.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/12/2011 7:24:00 PM
Obviously oblivious. Well done!
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