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A Detective In the House

The clues are there. The notes. The writing. The phone numbers. The calendar. Especially the calendar holding all the secrets of what was done and will be done. He is bent over the cubby-holed desk, slippers, flannel bathrobe, searching through the familiar and seeing only the hidden, the missing, the opaque. The crime? Something stolen, precious and worse, it is just out of sight, next to the words, the notes, the writing, the calendar. Especially the calendar. So obvious the number, the day, yet not now the season. He finds her worried face again and continues. All those around him keep it from him- the secret is- nothing is gone, nothing was done. The detective searches for himself in the clues of unravelling time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/11/2021 2:44:00 PM
Touching. A pleasure to find your beautiful poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Douglas~
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Date: 12/15/2019 10:40:00 AM
This is so beautiful, it could be written about my mother too, as you well know. LOVE, Gail
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Date: 11/30/2019 9:40:00 AM
Do drop by for a visit. ;0)
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Date: 11/30/2019 9:39:00 AM
It was a pleasure to read your writing this morning. I would say you are one of the best I have read here at the soup. You have skills my friend. Blessings Rick.
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Date: 2/8/2018 8:27:00 PM
Douglas, you have an unbelievable way with words, the reader hangs on to every word, in suspense... wanting to know more.
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Date: 1/3/2018 2:16:00 PM
hmmm, very intriguing. I wonder if the mystery segues into boundary waters.
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