A Desperate City

Hello to you from the gray gloomy city,
Where crowds unconsciously worship despair,
Indulging in dangers of constant self-pity
With naive belief in the world's being fair.

They have no trust in a man's inner power,
And fortitude sounds like something unknown.
They have no poets, just ones of an hour,
Who drown at once in the thoughts of their own.

With greed they consume plain illusions for dinner,
And dress them with lies when they serve the new dishes
To those so-called "pathological sinners"
Who find someone else's delusions delicious.

They have Friday liter-mates rather than friends
To mark that the week of no favor is ending,
But even with glasses of spirits in hands
They look worse than misery. Are they pretending?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 10/11/2009 10:51:00 AM
All I can say is - this really is poetry!! Great work.
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Date: 10/9/2009 9:26:00 AM
Amazing work! i love this. --Raiin
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Date: 10/7/2009 5:10:00 AM
Excellent poem. in some ways the same could be said of many men, in many cities, in many countries Its just tastes a little different from place to place.
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Date: 9/30/2009 9:18:00 AM
a wonderful poem, thank you for sharing it with us. good luck in the contest. peace, hope, love, and equality, Ridge
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Date: 9/26/2009 10:33:00 AM
April, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/26/2009 3:38:00 AM
Congrats 2u on your poem making it through to the finals, bravo!
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Date: 9/25/2009 11:06:00 PM
Congrates on your wonderful poem going through to the finals ... Love Jayne
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Date: 9/25/2009 1:25:00 PM
Very touching. I loved every line... and I felt every feeling.... very well written.... please keep writing, you are a true poet and a talented one.... Congrats on making it to the semis....my wishes are with u for the finals...... keep writing, and keep writing....
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Date: 9/25/2009 12:00:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/25/2009 10:18:00 AM
Very impressive. I like it. Congrats on making it in to the Soup finals. -ED-
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Date: 9/25/2009 5:52:00 AM
Ahhh the Russian soul? My Dad's side were Russian I believe from around Minsk? Russian Jew who fled the programs to Germany? Yes, and some actually made it forward to England then the US. The romanticised view of Russia is that all living there have "tourtured soul" are there NO areas of Great Mother Russia where happiness abides? Congrad's on your 1st round WIN! Light & Love
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Date: 9/25/2009 5:44:00 AM
beautiful poem...
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Date: 9/24/2009 1:24:00 PM
Congrats! Patricia
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Date: 9/24/2009 11:41:00 AM
April, congratulations in getting past round one of the competition >> James
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Date: 9/24/2009 10:35:00 AM
Best wishes in the next round, April. A very powerful poem.
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Date: 9/24/2009 7:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through to the first round April.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/22/2009 7:40:00 PM
April, congrats on your feature this week...Raul
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Date: 9/22/2009 2:46:00 PM
Congratulations on getting featured this week!
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Date: 9/22/2009 10:24:00 AM
My you brought memories with this one April!! My days drinking in NorthBeach were some of the loneliest of my life and of course we were pretending ... smile ... now after 30 years of sobriety in Oregon I can look back and feel great sadness for that woman and gratitude for who she is today ... thanks so much for this poignant write which is featured this week at the Soup! Congratulations !!
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Date: 9/22/2009 6:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week April, nice write>>James
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Date: 9/22/2009 3:03:00 AM
brilliant :) really breathtaking..
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Date: 9/22/2009 3:01:00 AM
I really like this - you capture the superficiality and heartlessness of the masses. It made me smile though, it reminds me of my poem 'Dark City'... we are certainly on the same wave length! Charlotte
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Date: 9/21/2009 3:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week April. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2009 4:59:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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