A Depressed Ant

Watching the marching ants, while I wondering their monotonous strife,
A weary one left the line, away he walked to a lonesome land.
Hands on head with faltering gait, dearth of joy he wandered a bit.
There he lied low to the ground, kissing mother earth like a depressed ant.
Is he an osculator, mourning on his vacant love?
Or he an emulous one, cudgeled by a better brain?
A miffed rummager of copious grain, or he repenting on a horrible crime?
I pondered on his dreadful distress, longing for the profound stillness.

Watching the painful life astir my humanity, finer ways I posit to end his endless tomorrows,
From a creative mind, unknown to the quizzical ant,
First I gifted a bubble of water, for him to drown in style.
But he moved in insolent silence, may be knows the art of swimming!
Then I helped him to the edge of the land, for a profane jump to the bottomless deep.
A coward, fearing height he retreat, back to the land panting nervy.
Later I offered bane of death, but he sniffed and moved away.
Then a knot for him to hang, eyeing it he jumped through it.
While my drained splendid mind, puzzled by his mocking insolence,
Sneering at my humanity, picking a hill on his shoulder,
He walked back to the line of labour, leaving me - the foolish human.
Life is dancing in the background, on the stage of silent death.


Date of Entry : 26/07/2020
Contest : Pareidolia Poetry Contest
Sponsor : craig cornish
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Romios Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 9:39 AM
Highly original..Jenish! Best wishes.. Pangiexx
Somadas Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 11:38 PM
Thank you Panagiota..
Trifiatis Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 1:32 AM
Watching the ants at work surely we get an idea of life's struggle dearest, Jenish! Inspiring and profound writing that teaches us a lesson or two! Good luck my friend!
Somadas Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 1:44 AM
Thank you Demetrios for your kind support.. Have a great day..
Hawkins Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 9:30 PM
poor ant, he needed a little parachute to float around for awhile, until he felt relaxed enough to join the line of labour and hopefully be able to look forward to a happier time before his time on earth is up.... life goes on..... I really enjoyed reading this interesting verse .Thank you Jenish...
Somadas Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 9:33 PM
Thank you Shirley.. I tried to mock on the mentality of human animals towards a little depression.. Happy to know that you enjoyed the write..
Wolf Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 5:56 PM
Ha, ha! I don't know anything about this contest, but it sure brings out the creative energy in you!! What a romp! ~ Your Ant and Uncle
Somadas Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 9:31 PM
lol.. Tried to be a little mischievous.. Thank you Gershon for your support..
Andresen Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 7:20 AM
- The ant : Small? ... I? ... Far from ... I'm just big enough - Fills myself completely longitudinally and transversely from top to bottom - Are you bigger than yourself maybe? - hugs // Anne-Lise :) ... Good luck in the contest :)
Somadas Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 9:30 PM
I tried to bring a bit of sarcasm on the human approach towards depression.. People are committing suicide for a lot variety of reasons.. I don't know how much I could convey.. Anyway a big thanks for your support..
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