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A Dent In My Heart

A dent in my heart I will never admit to You can conk me over the head, knee cap me. I am not admitting to loving you at all right now I will never let you know that you sliced up my heart. It is in teeny tiny parts scattered on the bedroom floor. I kick some of them around sometimes, for fun. It’s okay when I have on socks. When I do not, well. Yuck! Here I lie on the bed determined to think of not you. But not you has a face that keeps popping up And not you have hands that keep creeping over my eyes Yelling stupid stuff like “peek a boo” I am not a baby. Why I even thought this cute I do not know. Not you has moved on I am ever so glad Not you Not me Not us Not today anyway

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 5/17/2020 12:27:00 AM
Caren, Wonderful lick in 'Not today anyway', I can relate to 'not you', just maybe not today. -Richard
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/17/2020 10:58:00 AM
I am so glad. Thank you Richard.
Date: 5/16/2020 10:31:00 PM
You ARE a woman! :) gw ~ Knot Eye
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/17/2020 10:58:00 AM
I have no idea actually. My husband and I debate this often. He calls me his "nine year old boy" and let us not discuss this any further.
Date: 5/16/2020 11:23:00 AM
I love the phrase 'sliced up my heart' - and how you kick it around 'sometimes, for fun' - very descriptive!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/16/2020 7:47:00 PM
Thank you Michelle.

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