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Trionet
Created by L Milton Hankins, a Trionet is a two stanza poem. The first stanza follows the rules for a standard triolet of eight (8) lines ABaAabAB (capital letters are repeated lines). The second stanza consists of six (6) lines, formed with five (5) lines repeated from the first stanza and adding an appropriate non-repeated rhyming last line with a rhyme scheme of AAABBb.

             

A delicate flower, hope starts to grow, slowly at first, as it sprouts in the light. And then, suddenly, it blooms on the go. A delicate flower, hope starts to grow, and once firmly rooted, it's quick to show. Lifting your spirits till your soul takes flight, a delicate flower, hope starts to grow; slowly at first, as it sprouts in the light. A delicate flower, hope starts to grow, and then, suddenly, it blooms on the go. And once firmly rooted, it's quick to show; slowly at first, as it sprouts in the light. Lifting spirits until your soul takes flight, hope helps you believe you will be alright.

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Date: 6/28/2021 9:21:00 AM
The blooming flower is a lovely visual metaphor for hope growing into maturity. Congratulations on your win. Blessings of hope to you!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/28/2021 10:37:00 AM
Thanks Sam, it's always a pleasure to hear from you my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/24/2021 8:46:00 AM
A beautiful trionet, Emile, showing the relationship we have with the delicate flower, a splendid metaphor, too. And thanks for using the form, friend.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/24/2021 10:16:00 AM
Thanks Milt, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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