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A Decidedly Short Interview With A Black Hole

The astronaut saw the black hole And suddenly feared for his soul He chose to die brave And gave life a wave And as he went in he cried, “Goal!” The astronaut clung to his pride As his atoms were spread far and wide And he nearly cried Because as he died A voice in the dark said, “Off side!”
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M  Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 4:35 AM
Belated POTD Congrats my funny friend!! As per a clever funny last line! Your trade mark Ha! Debx
Flood Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 3:39 PM
Thanks, Deb. Hope you enjoyed our very soggy UK ;-)
Edmonds  Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 3:41 AM
Very amusing Terry, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle
Flood Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 2:44 PM
Glad you enjoyed, Belle. Terry
Schatz Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 10:51 PM
That's hilarious Terry. I really did LOL. Congrats of POTD!
Flood Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 2:42 PM
Thanks, Robert. Much appreciated.
Cunningham Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 8:10 PM
Belated congrats Terry on your well deserved honour of POTD. Tom
Flood Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 2:41 PM
Thanks, Tom. I spent about a month concocting ‘Terror Bugs’ and about twenty minutes concocting this… and this gets POTD… Hey! I ain't complaining ;-)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 7:57 PM
I love this. Fave. Congratulations on POTD! xomo
Nicole Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 6:27 PM
' The astronaut clung to his, ' well, you know. I must say, this thought made me giggle and blush. :) Clever and creative, indeed. Congratulations Terry, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Flood Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 2:39 PM
Thank you, Brandy. Nice to hear from you. Terry
Sands Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 1:39 PM
Congratulations for POTD. Enjoy :)
Flood Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 2:44 PM
Thank you, Heidi. Appreciated
Mcintosh Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 1:14 PM
Wonderful writing, story telling. Excellent. Congrats on POTD. God bless you always, love, Gina
Flood Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 2:47 PM
Thanks, Gina. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
Allison Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 12:11 PM
woohoooo POTD! Many congrats Terry:-) hugs jan xx
Flood Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 2:53 PM
Thank you, Jan. Surprised and chuffed in equal measure. Terry
Greenhough Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 10:59 AM
Congratulations on POTD. This is a futuristic poem written with great ingenuity. My congratulations is heartfelt.
Flood Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 2:54 PM
Your congrats are truly appreciated, Hilda. Terry
Goldsmith Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 9:31 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A fun/cute "Black Hole" Limerick write. Thanks for the laugh. Have a great day writing away...........................
Flood Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 2:54 PM
Nice to hear from you, Paula. And a big thank you.
Wolf Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 8:32 AM
Your brilliance finally recognized. Congrats, Terry.
Flood Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 2:55 PM
It was only a matter of time, GW… now peel me a grape…
Baker Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 8:25 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Terry! A fine one to enjoy. Nice humor and twist, my friend. Enjoy your special day of recognition. Bill
Flood Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 3:00 PM
Thanks, Bill. A most pleasing surprise this morning. Terry
Lawless Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 7:51 AM
Terry, I was intrigued by the title and amused by the poem. Nicely done bit of word play and Limerikian humor
Flood Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 3:02 PM
I wrote three poems for this contest and chose this - eventually. Glad you enjoyed.
Fowler Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 6:34 AM
Thanks for the giggles today Terry, and oh, btw, Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)
Flood Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 3:03 PM
You’re welcome, Linda. Thanks for the congrats.
Bowring Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 5:50 AM
Many congratulations dear Terry for POTD with this very funny limerick. Great to see you in the very worthy spotlight! I think he should have had another shot in the dark! :) Shame there wasn’t much left of him. Keep them coming :)))
Flood Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 3:07 PM
Thank you, Christina. Much appreciated
Rodgers Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 4:34 AM
Hello Terry, I am back again to congratulate you on a stellar poem making POTD. - Blessings, Daniel
Flood Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 3:31 PM
Appreciated, Daniel. Terry
Kendrick Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 4:25 AM
congratulations on your potd. Sara K
Flood Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 3:31 PM
Thanks so much, Sara.
Messina Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 4:23 AM
Very witty, Terry. Congratulations on POTD!
Flood Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 3:30 PM
Thanks, Charlie. Glad you enjoyed.
Kitchin Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 4:19 AM
Terry, a great set of limericks, congratulations on POTD!
Flood Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 3:29 PM
Thanks, Tania. An unexpected but pleasant surprise.
Kaufman Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 4:15 AM
Congratulations on this witty POTD. fyi one doesn't have to leave this planet to find that black hole as I recently discovered. LOL enjoy your honor!
Flood Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 3:28 PM
Thank you, Nancy. Appreciate your visit. Terry
Lane Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 3:51 AM
Looks like your astronaut scored his goal after all with your potd. Congratulations, Terry!!
Flood Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 3:20 PM
He’ll be a bunch of very happy molecules, Lin. Thanks for your congrats. Terry
Andresen Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 1:51 AM
- Congratulations on your great p.o.t.d., Terry :) - hugs
Flood Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 3:14 PM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise
May Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 1:48 AM
Lol, Nice one Terry, Congrats on POTD
Flood Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 3:13 PM
Cheers, Joseph.
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April 11, 2024 at 1:26 AM
Back with congratulations on a supermassive POTD Terry, looks like the Refs decision was overturned by peer pressure, rather than gravity after all, Go on my son! Cheers David
Kavanagh  Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 12:56 AM
He certainly would, I was only thinking about him recently, a hard act to follow!
Flood Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 3:12 PM
Don’t tell anyone, David, but whenever a Limerick is POTD, I feel it’s a mini victory for all Limerick writers. Rico (R.I.P) would have been delighted.
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