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A Debt

A Debt

I’ve known whirlwinds
that swept me off my feet
earthquakes
firestorms
and ice
colder than 
backs turned in darkness
goodbyes so final you’d thought
“someone died”
laced with the words
“get out”

I’ve heard doors close
sealed
like coffin lids
never to be opened
less to exhume a rotted thing
phones hung up with no
polite human word
wonder of why you
times with hurt
neither rain or night
can ease
I’ve had hopes
daydreams 
fantasies
make it magic
you could almost touch
belief so strong
you glowed
with nothing real but thoughts

Yes,
I understand
it’s a tragedy
or a debt

7/30/17

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/16/2017 2:03:00 PM
Debt paid in tears and stoic resolve. Powerful acknowledgements this down-to-earth, gritty real poem, Janis. You wield a powerful pen, dear. I'm afraid of you, but I believe you would spare me. Your mercy is my debt to you. Wonderful poem. Star bright write. Love and joy always.
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Date: 8/1/2017 10:54:00 PM
Well this is really sad but beautifully written. Such an effortless flow.
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Date: 8/1/2017 6:15:00 PM
The brevity of your words impacts each line with more power. I love the creative way this is composed Janis. This poem is very worthy of being on the winner's list. Congratulations Janis! : )
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Date: 8/1/2017 5:51:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Janis.
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Date: 8/1/2017 4:29:00 PM
Nicely done, Janis , congratulations you on your win ~*
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