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On the outskirts of a long-abandoned country town beyond the crumbling headstones and elmwood trees is mounted a dark dismal figure of what used to be a scarecrow whose limbs flail in Autumn's breeze Hung as if crucified, his death was never mourned The creature decayed in the midst of a barren field Fallow lies the ground he once so boldly protected Nigh on twenty years since wheat crops gave yield Poor beast, with innards of grayed moss and twigs Tenebrous, the moldy growth on his stygian face as fog encroaches to shield me in the shadows of night He's a monolith of death, staked in this cursed place Darkness saturates the clouds and shrouds the moon Comes the North wind, and a caw... caw... cawing sound A murder of crows take flight over the wretched scene Where once reigned a Sovreign who was never crowned

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Date: 6/29/2024 4:25:00 PM
An amazing poem, put together with skill and imagination....you really know how to tell a story and make it come alive my dear Lin...with that meaning lurking just underneath. Some of the lines read like honey to the ears...eg darkness saturates etc etc. The accompanying picture compliments your words just beautifully.
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Date: 6/29/2024 2:29:00 PM
Very creative! I agree with Daniel this poem works on more than one level. We can be victimized by life and become like the scarecrow and lament. Or we can do some spiritual work experience growth and rise above it all simply fly away yelling a caw like the crow perhaps doing some shape shifting. The fact that one can learn from your poem about self makes it a gem!
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Date: 6/29/2024 12:11:00 AM
Good Morning Lin, I've read this now several times and like the scarecrow there are many in life that serve a purpose but when their use is no longer of value are left to rot and decay without a second thought. I especially loved the last two lines. Many people deserve recognition but never receive it . This is such a powerful poem, that goes way beyond a scarecrow .Danny
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Lin Lane
Date: 6/29/2024 12:24:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jan ;-)
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/29/2024 1:45:00 AM
I too have read it several times, the description is just amazing. x
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Lin Lane
Date: 6/29/2024 1:42:00 AM
Good morning, Danny. Reading a poem more than once is a great compliment to me, so I thank you for that and for your thoughtful insight into this one. You're right. It goes far beyond the death of a scarecrow. Metaphorically, it could relate to several dire emotional experiences.
Date: 6/28/2024 5:06:00 PM
Lin, you write dark poetry very well. So descriptive. A good one for Halloween:) I think anyone who has ever been lonely can also relate to this one.
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Lin Lane
Date: 6/29/2024 1:39:00 AM
Should I be worried about writing dark poetry, Danny? lol As long as I have friends like you to pull me out of those spaces, I'll be fine. This one was written a long time ago, not when I was lonely but in a dark emotional place. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 6/28/2024 9:02:00 AM
gosh your vivid descriptive poem gave me the chills and the picture is perfect, I especially love 'Poor beast, with innards of grayed moss and twigs Tenebrous, the moldy growth on his stygian face' hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/29/2024 1:44:00 AM
I will have to see if I can find it i took it several years ago - when hubby had been going to set up a PA system outside the church for a massive funeral so the mourners could hear the service outside. hugs jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 6/29/2024 1:37:00 AM
Jan, I'd love to see that photo. Perhaps you'll use it as incentive to write a poem and post both?
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/28/2024 10:12:00 AM
I took a fab photo of 2 crows sitting on a grave stone, it gave me the chills Lin
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Lin Lane
Date: 6/28/2024 9:27:00 AM
It wasn't even Autumn when I wrote this one. I have a distaste for crows and sometimes when I hear one cawing, I shiver. They're always good inspiration for writing dark poetry. Thanks for the morning visits.

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