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A Day Pass Not By

young morn breeze sworn such zeal in teal blue shades view fades ducks swim to brim of pond be yond grass bank like rank A cool yard pool kids play their way all day they dive flop, jive mom sighs kids cry sun burn they'll learn 3/15/2022

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/28/2022 2:13:00 PM

Excellent group. They are not so easy to write. I enjoyed reading all of them. Your visits to my page were uplifting. Sara

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/19/2022 7:28:00 PM

Very lovely read. Charming write!

Jeff Kyser

Date: 3/18/2022 10:32:00 AM

Really have grown to like the whimsy and fun in these footles - nice job!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/18/2022 9:09:00 AM

This is gorgeous " such zeal in teal"

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 3/17/2022 8:58:00 PM

So clever and delightful. A lovely story in rhyme. Thank you. Eve

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/16/2022 9:42:00 AM

Cool and cute. Well done. Hugs. Victor

Supraja Kannan

Date: 3/16/2022 6:05:00 AM

Such a beautiful footle... Loved the story...

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/15/2022 11:54:00 AM

This footle has such a pretty jazziness!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/15/2022 6:27:00 AM

My fave part: of pond be yond…cleverly done!