A Day In the Park

On collecting my grandson
i asked  where he would like to go
he said " The park to feed the ducks, Grandad"
"the park it is " Ashton, i said.

Was a mere ten minute stroll, to our local park
sun shining down, clear blue sky
approaching the gates,was an ice cream van
walking towards the animalS, icelollys in hand

Ashton`s eyes lit up, with happiness, when he seen the animals
we had carrots,cabbabe and bread for their feed
knelt feeding the rabbits,through a meshed fence
onto the duck pond, a balloon seller filling with heleium

On the corner of the mass of green lush fields
children playing, ballons taking to the sky
multitude of colours,children crying 
parents back to buy more.

Paul beadnall. For Francine Roberts .. Happiness is a balloon.

17/72011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Villanueva Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 7:38 AM
a great entry . . .really colorful and a well-interpreted picture. . .still well-narrated story . . wonderful . .*-* junjun ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`" GOOD LUCK "
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July 17, 2011 at 7:53 AM
Thank you for your kind comment on my poem JunJun. Always encouraging when positive remarks are posted,thanks again bless up.. Paul
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