Harry Horsman Poet Rhyme

A Day In May

Allured ripples of sparkling lips
Through meadows fanned by fragrant breeze
Her face I’ve touched with fingertips
Along floral banks which appease.
While waters brisk with melody
Aid one's journey to buoyant sea
The choral breach of hymnody
Welcome the waves of sonic glee.

 © Harry J Horsman 2022

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders May 27, 2022 at 5:58 AM I'm in love with every beautiful and melodic line, Harry...a fave for me. Congrats! Blessings, Rhonda xx

Eve Roper May 19, 2022 at 1:54 PM Harry, congratulations on your win in Andera's contest. . Blessings to you.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl May 18, 2022 at 11:42 PM wow, a song xx

Sam Kauffman May 18, 2022 at 11:02 AM Harry, "sonic glee" indeed. The breeze, the stream and "her face I've touched with fingertips" are wonderfully crafted in this symphonic rhapsody of love in scenes of May. Congratulations on your win for this beautiful painting meant to be viewed and enjoyed each and every day.

Paula Goldsmith May 16, 2022 at 8:17 AM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Love it. Have a blessed day/week...................

Joe Maverick May 15, 2022 at 10:58 PM Well done Harry'

Joe Maverick May 15, 2022 at 10:58 PM Well done Harry'

Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2022 at 1:55 PM What stood out for me with this one was the beautiful imagery. Thanks so much for creating this pretty poem, harry. Congrats in my contest.

Jennifer Proxenos May 14, 2022 at 7:56 AM Vibrant, vivid imagery with profound meaning and eloquently executed - in short stupendous. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Anil Deo May 11, 2022 at 1:17 AM O so good, Harry. Musical, poetic, a fave (I miss your comment-uplift in May) shalom, shalom

Bill Baker May 10, 2022 at 4:04 PM Exquisite imagery, Harry. A lovely written poem. Bill

Panagiota Romios May 10, 2022 at 12:44 PM Well done, Harry, Bravo! You caught me on those first two lines, Just stunning! Pangie xo

Rob Carmack May 10, 2022 at 10:51 AM Love the imagery and you don't come across the word "hymnody" often.

Heidi Sands May 10, 2022 at 7:19 AM This is beautiful Harry. I love it :)

Sotto Poet May 10, 2022 at 7:07 AM Harry, you've done an excellent job with the imagery and the description. Beautiful and quite artistic, to say the least! Wishing you the best of success in the contest.

I Am Anaya May 9, 2022 at 4:25 PM Her face I’ve touched with fingertips...how romantic, Harry good luck in the contest!

Mystic Rose Rose May 9, 2022 at 12:23 PM I hear the sound of sweet sweet music, and its connected to your darling poetry Harry, thanks you for sharing, wings wishes on Angel dove wings

Kim Rodrigues May 9, 2022 at 11:50 AM Sweet!

Judy Ball May 9, 2022 at 9:12 AM Ooo! Love this. So beautifully worded and wonderful rythem and rhyme. God Bless, B

Valsa George May 9, 2022 at 4:49 AM May is a month of alluring beauty and romance ! You have kept up the spirit of a lovely day in May 'fanned by fragrant breeze' and 'waters brisking with melody'

Supraja Kannan May 9, 2022 at 2:30 AM Lovely... Such a romantic write... Loved the flow...

Darlene De Beaulieu May 8, 2022 at 11:52 AM Hello Harry, I feel the romance in this poem. Enjoy your day my friend.

Joe Maverick May 8, 2022 at 9:16 AM Excellent picture and descriptive Harry, Best wishes for the contest '

Paulette Calasibetta May 8, 2022 at 8:56 AM Beautiful~ very artful indeed! Good luck in the contest. :)Paulette

Demetrios Trifiatis May 8, 2022 at 6:19 AM Well reflecting on a day in May, my friend, Harry. Good luck! Blessings.

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