Tom Cunningham Poet Quatrain

A Day At the Beach

I went to the beach one June day
Took my grandsons to swim and play
Told them not to swim out of reach
One June day I went to the beach.

We had ice cream to cool us down
Sun was hot we were turning brown
Such a great day it felt like a dream
To cool us down we had ice cream. 

A boy with a kite flew it high
We watched it dancing in the sky 
It darted left it darted right 
Flew it high a boy with a kite. 

Big grey clouds came the sky turned black 
Picked up our things and headed back 
The day cut short it was a shame
The sky turned black big grey clouds came.




Written June 10th  2020.

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Lisa Brown June 19, 2020 at 9:40 PM Typical English weather! I cannot wait for a day at the beach when we are able! Happy times ahead! Brilliant Tom, well done :-) Tom Cunningham June 20, 2020 at 4:59 AM Thanks Lisa, hopefully it won't be long before things get back to normal. Tom

Connie Marcum Wong June 13, 2020 at 5:38 PM Reminds me of the childhood saying Rain, rain go away. This form is a challenge you have mastered well Tom. xxoo Tom Cunningham June 13, 2020 at 5:40 PM Thanks Connie, brought back memories, my daughters used to say that when they were little. Tom

Arturo Michael June 13, 2020 at 11:44 AM I like that first stanza or the first rhyme... of the Quatrain...Nice Tom Cunningham June 13, 2020 at 1:13 PM Thank you Arturo, happy you enjoyed it. Tom

Supraja Kannan June 13, 2020 at 2:03 AM That was a great day! Lovely one for the contest, Tom... I enjoyed it... Reads like a winner. . Tom Cunningham June 13, 2020 at 3:20 AM Thank you very much Supraja, I'm pleased you liked it. Tom

Carolyn Devonshire June 12, 2020 at 12:51 PM I was really enjoying reading about all the fun you had at the beach. Rain is a game changer, Tom. Our beach clears out nearly every afternoon when summer storms arrive. I'm hanging in there and hope you are well, my friend. Hugs, Carolyn Tom Cunningham June 12, 2020 at 12:59 PM Thank you Carolyn, I know only too well, that said I do like the Florida storms, they're awesome to see. All good here, hope you are too. Tom

Joseph P. DiMino June 12, 2020 at 10:00 AM A day at the beach with grandchildren...no more joyful way to share one's self. Even the black clouds could not change that, I am certain, for them or for grandpa. Great read, Tom. Blessings! Tom Cunningham June 12, 2020 at 10:38 AM Thank you very much Joe, it's funny when you look back, you forget the negative things only rembering the happy moments. Tom

Joanna Daniel June 12, 2020 at 12:46 AM Such a lovely description of your day at the beach, Tom:) I find this form challenging, but you have done it well:) Tom Cunningham June 12, 2020 at 6:11 AM Thank you very much Jo, it was a challenge doing the swap ensuring it still made sense. Tom

Lindsay Laurie June 11, 2020 at 10:39 PM G'day Tom … nice bright poem to describe your day at the beach, but of course rain on the way has the habit of being a Grinch - thanks Tom - Lindsay Tom Cunningham June 12, 2020 at 6:08 AM Thanks Lindsay, as the saying goes, rain stopped play. Tom

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders June 11, 2020 at 6:11 PM Cherished memories with your grandsons, Tom. It sounds like it was a fun day! Best of luck in the contest...blessings, Rhonda xx Tom Cunningham June 12, 2020 at 6:06 AM Thank you very much Rhonda, hopefully the restrictions will be lifted to go in a few weeks. Always enjoy the beach. Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis June 11, 2020 at 3:01 AM What a delightful poem filled with uplifting emotions and much love! I enjoyed it my friend, Tom. Few clouds cannot spoil the memories of the day! Blessings! Tom Cunningham June 11, 2020 at 4:02 AM Thank you Demetrios, you're right when you look back you forget the clouds, it's as if your mind filters them out. Tom

Jenish Somadas June 11, 2020 at 1:03 AM Your lovely outing spoiled by the rain.. But the trip you took us will remain.. Beautifully penned Tom.. Tom Cunningham June 11, 2020 at 4:00 AM Thank you Jenish, love your poetic comment. Tom

Quoth Theraven June 10, 2020 at 11:35 PM Tom, Even with cloud's turn this poem shines bright, and flies high with the kite. Very nice day in your write. -Richard Tom Cunningham June 11, 2020 at 3:59 AM Thank you Richard, love it by the sea, a few clouds I can cope with, but no fun in a downpour. Hope you're well Tom

Michelle Faulkner June 10, 2020 at 11:15 PM So descriptive, especially the ice cream and the kite, I hope it was a fun day! Tom Cunningham June 11, 2020 at 3:58 AM Thank you Michelle, always enjoy the beach, I was in Florida once and they told everyone to get off the beach as a storm was coming, never seen the sky so black. Tom

Timothy Mcguire June 10, 2020 at 10:24 PM I like this one and the flip flop was fun. Tom Cunningham June 11, 2020 at 3:55 AM Thank you Timothy, was going to enter this one but wrote another for it. Tom

Sandra Adams June 10, 2020 at 8:22 PM I love trips to the beach and can't wait until we are allowed to return... this was such a wonderful adventure, I felt as though I was there... nice penning Tom :) hugs Tom Cunningham June 11, 2020 at 3:54 AM Thank you Sandra, they've lifted restrictions here now but our warm spell has gone, it's like winter again. Tom

Ann Gilmour June 10, 2020 at 5:34 PM This is such a joyous and uplifting poem Tom and I can almost hear your grandsons' laughter as they played on the beach making sandcastles and having fun - such wonderful memories I have of when my son and grand kids were small - delightful write my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx being close to the sea is the only place for me... Tom Cunningham June 10, 2020 at 6:02 PM Thank you very much Ann, you're so lucky living by the coast. Still I do live in a lovely place in the Worcestershire countryside. Hope you get a better night's sleep. Tom

Gordon Mcconnell June 10, 2020 at 3:22 PM A lovely piece about a lovely day Tom, very excellently penned indeed. Blessings, Gordon Tom Cunningham June 10, 2020 at 3:47 PM Thank you Gordon, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Tom

Joseph May June 10, 2020 at 3:18 PM Sometimes the sun swaps with clouds, But the time spent in the sun was fun, Wonderful write Tom.. Tom Cunningham June 10, 2020 at 3:46 PM Thank you Joseph, we have to make the most of the sunshine, well in the UK anyway, it has a habit of going awol. Tom

Vijay Pandit June 10, 2020 at 3:11 PM Time with grandsons is always precious---may be a short day but you got it all done--swim, ice creams, flying kites--kids had a good time and I'm sure so did grandpa. Tom Cunningham June 10, 2020 at 3:44 PM Haha thanks Vijay, precious memories are made with days like this. Tom

Aditi Mishra June 10, 2020 at 12:56 PM That's a lovely quatrian from your pen Tom. Even though you had to cut short your time, I believe the trio to that beach must have been delightful. Hope you have a blessed day :) Tom Cunningham June 10, 2020 at 2:39 PM Thank you Aditi, it's always nice to spend time with family, dispite the weather. Tom

Jan Allison June 10, 2020 at 12:20 PM what a charming poem Tom sounds like a fun day apart from the weather:-) hugs Jan xx Tom Cunningham June 10, 2020 at 12:25 PM Thanks Jan, always have a great day at the beach, something magical about it. Think they might have ironed out the problems, went in to make a change and it done it straight away unlike yesterday. Tom

Nette Onclaud June 10, 2020 at 11:57 AM i like the turn in the end, tom... with your skillful pen, you always write superbly... find time to go to the beach again...huggs Tom Cunningham June 10, 2020 at 12:22 PM Thanks Nette, waiting to see what will be allowed, still up in the air, excuse the pun lol. Hope you get away too. Tom

Gershon Wolf June 10, 2020 at 11:11 AM Great idea to narrate a serendipity day at the beach in quatrain form. Thoroughly enjoyed, (though too the beach trip was cut short). Thanks, Tom! Tom Cunningham June 10, 2020 at 12:21 PM Thanks Gershon, mother nature intervened that day. Tom