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A Dark Underbelly

Like a pack of howling wolves in need of prey, A wounded urban psyche strains its gnarled voice, Motherless, fatherless, ice cold pavement waif, Wee small hours plight The rocks of his facade dispatched in ghost trains for those ghoulish oil float gutters to imbibe, Back street burden stray, schooled in fringe art fables, Phantom kite chaser Eerie street lights peer into an aimless soul, Clouds of pea soup fog engulf his raw foot slink, Firefly knotted angst or bilious grumble, Trash can tummy fare But still he ambles on, inner plagues in charge as loafers from the underworld gawk and gape, Pithy, a phased out coin for snow cap straggler, dead of night orphan. Date Poem Submitted : 19 th Of July 2020 Title : A Dark Underbelly Sponsor : Edward Ibeh

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Date: 10/6/2022 1:01:00 PM
Howard, this is a great piece about Night society. Its an alien place to most and your description of those lost souls was a the perfect fit for John's contest... and a well deserved placement.
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Date: 10/6/2022 5:42:00 AM
A difficult form but perfect for the inner twistings of this ghoulish creature. Congratulatiions. on your trophy win.
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Date: 10/4/2022 9:34:00 PM
Howard, you have so vividly described the plight of those on the streets! CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Date: 7/27/2020 11:42:00 AM
This is indeed a fine piece of literary grandeur Howard. Completely adorned with philosophical metaphors and depth. Congratulations on your win. Blessings!
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Howard Kerr
Date: 7/27/2020 11:56:00 AM
Aditi, Your in depth comments and incisive reviews of my entries are warmly welcomed by me. For someone of your stature to speak in such glowing terms of this work is taken very seriously on my part. Warmth Howard
Date: 7/22/2020 6:05:00 PM
A very deep write Howard.
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Date: 7/22/2020 6:27:00 PM
Hello James, Many thanks for your soup mail comment. Congratulations on your winning placement. Howard
Date: 7/22/2020 4:49:00 PM
such deep dark imagery, many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/22/2020 5:06:00 PM
Hi Jan, Congratulations to you on your utterly charming work and your well earned medal winning placement. Thanks so much for your kind soup mail and for your insights on my entry Warmth howard
Date: 7/22/2020 10:49:00 AM
This is a fabulous write, Howard:-) Congratulations on your deserving win in my contest!
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Date: 7/22/2020 11:08:00 AM
Hi Edward, I’m deeply honoured by your comment and the medal winning placement. I enjoyed the challenges posed by your contest. Thank you so very much Howard

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