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A Dark Night

Oh! The lighting bugs they light up with cry. Tis a bright light, Oh! What an excitement; A monster sails up in the dark night sky! Its big and cheesy, just like a cheese tie. This beast has so much more than alignment. A monster sails up in the dark night sky. I lay in wonder how it looks like pie. Flailing in my bed, not doing my assignment. I progress through the night’s black-blue end sky. Never, say never, a burnt crust is rye; Trifling for food, it’s a hell confinement. A monster falls down in the dark night sky. The orange and salmon abyss nears my eye. This monster, it has a shrew new statement. A monster falls down in the late night sky. Tis morning time, all the birds squeak at high! Reading mail for no future indictments. Outside I look the window in the sky. No monster, only the sunshine of mine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/18/2015 5:19:00 AM
good attempt at this hard form congrats on being featured hugs 6
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Date: 2/8/2015 8:12:00 PM
Thanks for the positive encouragement you guys. I will continue to read your work and hopefully we get to have a great time reading and writing poems!
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Date: 2/8/2015 3:42:00 PM
TRENT, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/8/2015 3:03:00 PM
Trent, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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