A Dark Man

This piece is dedicated with love to J.E. Gauthier, Jr. Active addict and father. 
Only by the grace of God may he be saved from the error of his ways.

 For years a dark man walked through a seemingly revolving door
 Steadily leaving his wife and kids as he searched for something more
 Occasionally calling home every now and again
 In his voice they could hear the taint of black sin
 
 Back then life on the road meant drugs money and women far as the eye could see
 He said he'd never look back 'cuz he was born free
 
 Life grew emptier as he grew older
 The drugs grew heavier as his heart grew colder
 His four children left behind with no place to call home
 From day one they made it in this world alone
 
  For years a dark man walked through a seemingly revolving door
 Steadily leaving his wife and kids as he searched for something more
 Occasionally calling home every now and again
 In his voice they could hear the taint of black sin

 Every few years he'd arrive unannounced offering money and a hug
 All while using the garage to hide his drug
 His spitting image could smell his guilt a mile away
 She rolled her gloomy blue eyes in unison with every false word he had to say

 Today his girls are grown raising girls of thier own
 December came and went
 February turned to Lent
 On a stormy midnight he still turns to his blue eyed spitting image
 As the clouds clear she is again lost in the scrimmage

 She lies awake with a bottle of wine in hand
 On her mind weighs a dark man
 His ways make him lonely and lost
 Yet to her death she will fight for him at all costs

  For years a dark man walked through a seemingly revolving door
 Steadily leaving his wife and kids as he searched for something more
 Occasionally calling home every now and again
 In his voice they could hear the taint of black sin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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September 24, 2026 at 6:27 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist,and I’d love to discuss the possibility of bringing this poem to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@: eve_verse_
Agustin Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 4:39 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 26, 2016 at 8:53 PM
Sara Beaderstadt, awesome poem. LINDA
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August 8, 2015 at 1:08 AM
Sara, Enjoyed reading your poem. **SKAT**
Brown Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 1:04 PM
Congratulations on your win Sara in Desiree's contest "Epiphanies". Love, Carol
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February 9, 2011 at 5:05 PM
Congratulations on obtaining honorable mention in the contest.
Calhoun Avatar
January 30, 2011 at 1:24 PM
Hi Sara - Congratulations on your WIN in Desiree's contest. Best wishes, Kory
Sweetheart Avatar
January 30, 2011 at 12:33 PM
Congrats Sara on your HM in the Epiphanies contest with this brilliant entry luv.. enjoy..
Mehta Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 4:52 PM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest, Sara
Kendrick Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 4:18 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 3:34 PM
A most interesting story, Sara. The bonds of blood can be very strong. Congratulations in this contest. LUv, Andrea
Roberts Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 3:24 PM
wonderfully written piece, congrats on your win in the contest
Johnson Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 3:08 PM
How very sad. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Kendrick Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 2:45 PM
Very captivating work..Enjoyed the story..It is so true what addiction can do to a person and their family.I hope that this is not your life but a topic about which you chose to write...Sara
Anderson Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 3:11 PM
A very moving poem. Jimmy
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