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A Dark Hidden Comfort

For my life that is not beyond repair, I flee to a place where I become lost, But am thankful to it. I cannot be found, Nor do I want to be found. I slip away willingly Into the dark hidden comfort of obscurity To the point of where I am almost Consumed by a dark force similar to death. Death is easy, but life is hard, So I tend to keep to myself As so on one knows i'm gone. The Death of my life Drains my Soul as I Bleed from my Heart, pouring out into The Deep Beyond of the Universe. The dark hidden comfort acting as A blanket of safety, even if it sounds morbid.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/16/2010 1:20:00 PM
Superb poem Brittany, i would choose the living the life >> James
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Date: 2/16/2010 8:34:00 AM
wow this is a great piece could be considered morbid but i did not think so i thought it was honest, a truth most people dont want to or cant bring themselves to speak well. but poetry like this tells it how we feel it and we all feel it! i loved it and yeah death is much easier than life much much! =)jo
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Date: 10/23/2009 3:25:00 AM
I enjoyed reading you poetry this morning. Thank you for sharing it Brittany. May you have a wonderful day full of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/22/2009 7:34:00 PM
at least you do have some comfort:) Keep sharing, hope you feel better.
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