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A Dark Embrace

No powerhouse or wondrous treasure house, This would-be store with walls of muddied glass, With recall indistinct and fading fast, Untrusted, shifting, merciless impasse, Where splintered life is mocked and alien hope Seeks solace in soft-spoken thought, which caught Upon the wayward breeze, a floating seed, May yet to meaning and new life be brought Within this fragile oft-times weeping place. As night encroaches, yet again we pause, Perhaps perceiving immortality, But all that echoes is our self-applause.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/21/2017 4:54:00 AM
- Beautiful with your deep thoughts, Peter - Best wishes for a lovely day - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Peter Rees
Date: 9/21/2017 5:05:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. I hope your day goes well too !
Date: 9/19/2017 2:15:00 PM
The words jump out at me like lions. Where is this place that settles toward demise yet begs with tearful eyes to be given life once again to service fickle man. I am probably totally off target but this is how your poem spoke to me.
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Peter Rees
Date: 9/20/2017 4:31:00 AM
The dark embrace - of mental illness, in its many forms.
Date: 9/19/2017 11:06:00 AM
Beautifully written.
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Peter Rees
Date: 9/24/2017 4:18:00 AM
Thank you Dale. Your comment is much appreciated.

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