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Written: September 22, 2023 __________________________________________________________ In the vast expanse of the cosmic night, Where galaxies shimmer with celestial light, Gravity weaves its enchanting spell, Linking us together, where stardust dwells. Across the cosmos, a symphony begins, A dance of stardust, as the music sings, Planets and moons, in utopian harmony, Bound by the force, of gravity. Akin to celestial dancers, we twirl and spin, In this cosmic sway, ties meet and raw realms begin Stars burst and explode, creating a display, Of colors and wonders, in the Milky Way. Gravity pulls us closer, in a celestial embrace, As stardust swirls and dances with grace, We are but specks in the vastness of space, Yet connected by bonds we cannot erase. From the birth of a star, our journey unfolds, Through the cosmic depths, our story is told, In the ebb and flow of the universe's tide We find our place, edge by side. Gravity links us together, with invisible threads, As stardust, we are, in the universe's spreads. Across the galaxies, we traverse and explore, Discovering wonders never seen before, Planets and moons, a celestial choreography, In this grand symphony of stardust and gravity. Each step, each movement, a cosmic delight, As we dance across heavens, in the gloom of nights.

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Date: 9/23/2023 9:05:00 AM
Dear Sotto, this celestial poem definitely has woven an enchanting spell with its gravity and invisible threads. Your cosmic wordplay is such a delightful symphony here, sequined with marvelous glow of stars and planets revolving in a beautiful rhythm and cadence.. I love how beautifully you've created such vivid imageries which a reader can actually feel and get mesmerized! Just wow.. Your rhymes, as always, flow so gorgeously and your words come alive in a whimsical vibe! Absolutely love this
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Date: 9/23/2023 6:40:00 AM
Your galactic writes always leave me in awe! So celestial and heartfelt! I love how you paint imagery and write in such a descriptive manner “ of colors and wonders in the milky way” ah that line! And the birth of stars and how we twirl and swirl to the cosmic tunes across galaxies to explore n discover so much choreographed beyond everything that can be seem! What a soul warming and captivating poem this is! This poem made me dream away to a magical place and left me calm singing stars! Love it
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Date: 9/23/2023 5:38:00 AM
Stars burst and explode, creating a display, Of colors and wonders, in the Milky Way--A beautiful journey you describe, my friend. Much enjoyed the ride of the cosmic world through your imagination, Lasaad.
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