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A cut above

in-side or up-there god's geo-meter wont say swords have edges too

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/20/2023 1:13:00 PM

very cool KU, my friend. About raccoons. I really like them. I wonder if people can get them declawed like they do with cats. I think also it would be fun to own a skunk that has been deodorized. haha

Robert Warlov
Date: 12/20/2023 1:42:00 PM

Ask a veterinarian. ~ "Elysium's goons" is a stretch but I've got my Shakespeare cover. Probably most cats don't like the crunchy stuff but it struck me as having a high cute quotient.

MB Farookh

Date: 12/16/2023 6:21:00 AM

Yes, they have edges. But we tend to forget swords , also, have a sharp point. Lol.

Robert Warlov
Date: 12/16/2023 7:23:00 AM

The conundrum of the Craftsmans' dialectic, forged in perpetuity ~ how the story ends.

Tom Woody

Date: 12/10/2023 3:15:00 PM

Sharp buggers too!

Robert Warlov
Date: 12/10/2023 8:43:00 PM

... compared to "a line in the sand"? That's their point.

Paul Bell

Date: 12/10/2023 2:30:00 AM

If God had any sway, some countries wouldn't be here.

Robert Warlov
Date: 12/10/2023 3:29:00 AM

Too many gods competing for superiority ~ 'My dad's bigger than your dad' and "Humility" is a byword.

Robert Warlov

Date: 12/10/2023 1:29:00 AM

If "God is within", Jesus' lifting toward "The Heavens" is an astro-logical paradox.

Robert Warlov
Date: 12/10/2023 7:58:00 PM

1. The perpetuation of the mythos (collective Mind) applies to God also. He's always of the latest fashion. 2. Jesus never claimed to be God, only his "first-born", Material son. Vying for kingship? ~ Benoni/Benjamin's double portion.

Tom Woody
Date: 12/10/2023 3:16:00 PM

Simple answer: He's not within, neither is Jesus God. Problems, solutions. I'll be here all week...