A Cry of Love

She wore a gown of every shade 
even daisies in the fields could not compare 
to the eggshell-ivory-white, vanilla hues 
of her, nor the bright intense yellows of her shine! 
She was a gravitationally bound star,     
even the moon unmatchable to her rare beauty  
was beyond compare to her eccentric shades of navy,   
royal sapphires and Mayan blues ! 
Unparalleled to any other star, on a cold December night  
she watched her Savior Babe lay dormant, at the feet of her     
Un-comparable as gold, frankincense and Myrrh,   
unequaled as Archaic Angels of God's Kingdom girth,     
a transcendent helium gown of Romanesque beauty flared
and arrived that day. 
Spreading argent silver gowns of light and shining like 
a thousand twinkling lights, the world was never the same again
after that first Holy Cry, of Love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dutta Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 10:11 AM
Lovely and Graceful to charm the reader. Have Good Days
Empress Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 7:40 AM
Whoa this left me speechless, your use of note just frankincense and myrhhh but also your use of colors and imagery here truly left me lost within your lines captivated. Such a beautiful elegant write so well delivered, you are definitely a very versatile poet, love this
Jayasankar Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 6:07 AM
This is so graceful and descriptive with lots of rich images dear Vie... The ending is awesome... Hope you are doing great... Hugs... ~ Ani
Jones Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 2:59 AM
This is so holy! Love it!
One Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 7:48 AM
Lovely imagery in your descriptive words.. another lovely poem..
Buhagiar Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 5:37 AM
Great use of colours and the ending is beyond this world. Hugs.
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