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A Cry of Love

She wore a gown of every shade even daisies in the fields could not compare to the eggshell-ivory-white, vanilla hues of her, nor the bright intense yellows of her shine! She was a gravitationally bound star, even the moon unmatchable to her rare beauty was beyond compare to her eccentric shades of navy, royal sapphires and Mayan blues ! Unparalleled to any other star, on a cold December night she watched her Savior Babe lay dormant, at the feet of her Un-comparable as gold, frankincense and Myrrh, unequaled as Archaic Angels of God's Kingdom girth, a transcendent helium gown of Romanesque beauty flared and arrived that day. Spreading argent silver gowns of light and shining like a thousand twinkling lights, the world was never the same again after that first Holy Cry, of Love.

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Date: 10/3/2023 10:11:00 AM
Lovely and Graceful to charm the reader. Have Good Days
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Date: 10/1/2023 7:40:00 AM
Whoa this left me speechless, your use of note just frankincense and myrhhh but also your use of colors and imagery here truly left me lost within your lines captivated. Such a beautiful elegant write so well delivered, you are definitely a very versatile poet, love this
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Date: 10/1/2023 6:07:00 AM
This is so graceful and descriptive with lots of rich images dear Vie... The ending is awesome... Hope you are doing great... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 10/1/2023 2:59:00 AM
This is so holy! Love it!
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Date: 9/30/2023 7:48:00 AM
Lovely imagery in your descriptive words.. another lovely poem..
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Date: 9/30/2023 5:37:00 AM
Great use of colours and the ending is beyond this world. Hugs.
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