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A table of eight on the ship. A Catholic friend takes a sip. Her ice down her blouse. The eyes of all rouse. In bra, do her hands take a dip.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Fowler Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 10:21 AM
I chuckled out loud Kim. Cute! :) Congratulations! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 6:05 PM
Thanks, Linda!
Kitchin Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 1:52 PM
Kim, bawdy and funny, congratulations on your winning placement!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 3:30 PM
How do you found it bawdy and funny! Thank you, Tania!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 1:27 PM
Congratulations on your win. Thanks for the laugh. Good One... Have a great day/weekend..............
Rodrigues Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 3:30 PM
Glad you found it funny! Thank you, Paula!
Wolf Avatar
August 12, 2023 at 8:08 PM
Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 13, 2023 at 5:31 AM
Thank you for that hearty laugh :)
Legros Kelley Avatar
August 11, 2023 at 8:53 PM
Oh my goodness was this laugh unexpected, lol!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 12, 2023 at 7:04 AM
LOL! So glad you found it unexpected!
Baker Avatar
August 11, 2023 at 4:10 PM
LOL, very funny Limerick, Kim. Probably the highlight of the cruise. Have a great weekend, my friend. Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
August 11, 2023 at 4:54 PM
Really happened…lol!
Andresen Avatar
August 11, 2023 at 2:00 PM
- Grab it before it melts :))) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
August 11, 2023 at 4:54 PM
Ice cold, Anne-Lise ;)
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August 11, 2023 at 1:50 PM
Kim my goodness, I thought you were going to say (all hands on deck) take a dip, excellent one for the contest bol, cheers David
Rodrigues Avatar
August 11, 2023 at 4:55 PM
Thank you, David!
Brotherton Avatar
August 11, 2023 at 1:21 PM
Thanks for the chuckle. What a cute limerick.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 11, 2023 at 4:55 PM
Thank you, jerry!
Mcintosh Avatar
August 11, 2023 at 10:32 AM
lol... cute one. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
Rodrigues Avatar
August 11, 2023 at 4:55 PM
Thank you, Gina!
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