A Crimson Wave

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Red/Autumn/Artist
10/01/2023

A crimson wave applauds every brisk breeze,, sending cerise ripples through the treetops. And watching the leaves tumble from the trees, sunburned farmers start harvesting their crops. A scarlet sun bleeds onto carmine clouds, inking rubies that adhere to Fall's brush. Meanwhile, magenta and rose-sculpted shrouds depict Sol's death in a vermillion blush. As Nature's pallet inks Her abstract art, cinnabar collects on the forest trees. And as soon as Jack Frost's Fall visits start, russet canopies shift tints in degrees. Burgundy, fuchsia, and maroon leaves fall, creating the masterpiece known as Fall.

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Miranda Hawley

Date: 12/5/2023 5:31:00 PM

Descriptive! Great job, and thanks for sharing an example for exactly the style of sonnet you want.

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/6/2023 7:59:00 AM

Thanks, Miranda, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Silent One

Date: 10/9/2023 12:59:00 PM

A lovely sonnet full of imagery and one that flows and rhymes very well.. Thank you for writing and congratulations on your placement..

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/10/2023 7:32:00 AM

Thanks, Silent One; I appreciate the placement and your comments, my friend, Emile.

Sam Scott

Date: 10/4/2023 11:16:00 AM

Always going to applaud ANY poem about my favourite time of year.. but this is dreamy Emile, I enjoy the palette in your writing: "magenta and rose-sculpted shrouds". Ooh, nice. Well deserved placement

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/6/2023 8:41:00 AM

Thanks, Sam; I appreciate your comments, I also love the Fall season, my friend, Emile.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/3/2023 7:22:00 PM

Lovely colors of Autumn! Congratulations, Emile!

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/4/2023 8:17:00 AM

Thanks, Kim; as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.