A Crime of Passion

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You wonder how our love has died
It’s murder...by MY hand
A Crime of Passion’s what it is
I hope you understand

I spilt the blood of dying love
Put sword in to the hilt
And now I wear my mourning gown
But heart is free of guilt

Audacious is that question, “dear”
Forgot my tears last night?
Embrace refused, you  turned your back
And said, “Turn out the light!”

And did you ever question, “dear”
How this poor heart did tear
Those nights of passion you’d deny
Though heart and soul I’d bare

Some lukewarm love is not enough
this woman’s heart to fill
You think that only you have needs
Well, that prompted the kill!!!

It was a crime of Passion, “dear”
She really forced my hand
To live without her ecstasy 
Was more than I could stand!

I wanted more than you could give
My body’d throb and ache
To show that I was satisfied
Love making I would fake

And here you come and beg of me
To resurrect our love
We’ll it’s done gone and buried, “dear”
The spirit’s flown above

I walk right past the tomb and laugh
At all past misery
For now, you see, there is someone
Who gives Passion to me…

Eileen Manassian

;) Thought I'd try my hand at farce...

Here is a song that goes with this topic...Yes, an oldie...but a goldie....A woman needs love just like you do by Ray Parker Junior

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QvBmtqyaijI

Doo-doo-doo-doo-doo
Mmm-mmm-mmm

A woman needs love just like you do, hoo
Don't kid yourself into thinkin' that she don't
She can fool around just like you do, hoo
Unless you give her all the lovin' she wants

Don't the mistake of thinkin' old fashioned [Ooh, ooh]
Times have changed from yesterday
But no longer will those old double standards [Ooh, ooh]
Be accepted by the women of today

So when you think you're foolin' her
She just might be foolin' you
Remember if you can do it
She can too

Because a woman needs love just like you do, hoo
Hey, don't kid yourself into thinking that she don't
She can fool around just like you do, hoo
Unless you give her all the lovin' she wants

When her eyes are beggin' for affection [Ooh, ooh]
Don't put her off, don't make her wait
Don't try to give her that worn out excuse [Ooh, ooh]
About being tired and workin' late

I tell you one day you'll come home
Early from work [Home from work]
Open up the door
And get your feelings hurt

Because she needs it, yeah [Just like you do, hoo]
A woman's got to have it, whoa, yeah, just like you
And if you're smart, mmm, [Just like you do, hoo] you better stop foolin'
around, hey, hey
'Cause she will too, oh

Just like you do, hoo
Thinking that she don't, hoo, ooh
Just like you, hoo
Now an example to you

Is by the time poor Jack
Returned up the hill
Somebody else
Had been lovin' Jill

A woman needs love just like you do, hoo
Hey, don't kid yourself into thinkin' that she don't
She can fool around [Yeah, just like you do, hoo], she will fool around so
You better take out some insurance and be sure she won't

Give her the love, mmm [Just like you do, hoo], yeah
That sweet, sweet love, she wants it just like you
'Cause she can fool around [Just like you do, hoo] just like she will fool
around
With you or without you, just like you do

A woman needs love just like you do, hoo
Hey, don't kid yourself into thinking that she don't, hoo, ooh
She can fool around just like you, hoo
A woman needs it just like you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/8/2015 6:48:00 PM
lol this is great, I thought you didn't do humour my little Desert Orchid, the third stanza is pure comedy lol. Take care, Richard
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/9/2015 7:38:00 AM
Glad you found it amusing, Richard. Have a nice day.
Date: 1/27/2015 2:46:00 AM
Loved this! I love the title of your poem as well. :)
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Date: 1/26/2015 5:49:00 PM
Hi Eileen, Which one did I miss??
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/27/2015 12:42:00 AM
It's all good, Richard... :) Hope you're OK. I know I am...now! Hugs
Date: 1/26/2015 4:44:00 PM
A woman needs love ... and she needs it all...she needs it allllll!!! Don't leave her hanging there half way! The lady wants...satisfaction...she needs it all...she needs it alllll!!:) (ok, not the comment you expected, but it is different, no!) hugs // paul
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Date: 1/27/2015 12:43:00 AM
OHHHHHHH....delightfully different. Paul...you are learning to speak my language!!! Your fluency is increasing daily. :) Not the response to your post you are expecting, but different, no???? HUGS
Date: 1/26/2015 11:04:00 AM
Too powerful and loaded with a vivid rage ! Should crime passions be rated otherwise ? Well after savoring your poem,there should may be be another new insight into the matter as long as it triggers ideas and inspires the flow of juice !
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Date: 1/26/2015 1:17:00 PM
Thanks for this unique post, Abdelwaheb. I find your comment intriguing. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. Revenge is a theme I enjoy writing about. Thanks for the visit.
Date: 1/26/2015 9:47:00 AM
so tenderly you care for and honor your own sexuality and sincere expression of passion. Truly honest. Yes I can feel ..rated 7+++. Love Wonderaleen>rajat
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Date: 1/26/2015 1:19:00 PM
I do try to honor it, but...at times its a losing battle. Thank you for your kind visit, Rajat. I was just reading something to a friend who was visiting today and her reaction made me so sad....I'm seen as an oddity...Too passionate for my own good. Perhaps one day I will bury it all...Thanks for the visit.
Date: 1/26/2015 9:20:00 AM
A fascinating poem with the force of a megaton of poetic expression! A seven dear Eileen!
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Date: 1/26/2015 1:20:00 PM
I'm exuberant with your praise, my dear poet. You must always visit me. Hugs
Date: 1/26/2015 8:52:00 AM
Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned -- mighty is the passion that is abused . . . another awesome write! 7
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Date: 1/26/2015 1:21:00 PM
Thanks for the visit, David. I'm glad when you pass by and leave your comments. I thought this was a good satirical piece. Yes, a woman scored is a force to contend with. I hope you never face one!
Date: 1/26/2015 7:57:00 AM
I know what this is like, I had many years where my passion was denied. Thankfully those days are long gone.
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Date: 1/26/2015 1:46:00 PM
I'm so happy and thrilled for you, Richard. You are a man deserving of the richest faire of passion and love.
Date: 1/26/2015 1:51:00 AM
You are a wild flower that cannot survive in the desert of a damned lover...a man too dumb to nurture your beauty, too tired to taste your ecstacy, too old to believe in your majesty Eileen. You will always fight for your right to passion...passion is your gift, and your demand! Awesome warrior attitude in this poem... "I spilt the blood of dying love..." so very fierce! J.A.B.
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Date: 1/26/2015 2:07:00 AM
Perhaps the narrator of this piece would answer and say..."Wild flowers are rooted where they are planted and cannot leave the desert soil." Perhaps she would answer...."There is more to life than passion....security. stability, and camaraderie." Perhaps she would say a different version of Nathaniel Hale's declaration, "GIVE ME PASSION OR GIVE ME DEATH!" There are many ways the narrator would answer you, Justin. Here am I and I say, "Thank you for visiting me and making me feel like I'm a beautiful wild flower." That's been your gift to me...Seeing me in a different light. Thanks, Eagle.
Date: 1/25/2015 11:51:00 PM
Great job! I really enjoyed it. :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/26/2015 2:02:00 AM
Thanks, Rachel...Welcome to the soup.
Date: 1/25/2015 8:25:00 PM
Hmmm...to paraphrase, what's good for the goose is justifiable homicide of the gander ? :) Very enjoyable and truly funny, thanks for the smile, Eileen.
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Date: 1/26/2015 1:55:00 AM
I found it...the goose can share her Caboose! ;)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/26/2015 1:19:00 AM
I'm glad you got a laugh. Yes, we modern day women have to make our voices heard. Concepts of sexuality and sexual appetite are changing...THANK GOODNESS! Yes, if the gander can filander...the goose can too! ;) Couldn't come up with something that rhymes with goose! Thanks for the visit. Hugs
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