A Creole Woman

With her skin all over the castle breath,
growing so fine and fiery,
waiting for men through the spring,
countless as a dozen, 
I wait for my turns to give her my passion 
in red roses.

Are they in full range, a moment for me,
which I need only a minute to comply,
the faith of a man in love?

Oh, my creole woman!
Crowned de bloom,
as the birds that was born
in which the world exposition is now mine
in full.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 16, 2014 at 9:53 AM
Happy to see you on the winner's list. Congrats, george
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April 16, 2014 at 2:27 AM
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