A Country Christmas

He lay there in his cozy bed
And watched the blizzard rage.
He'd never seen Christmas like this—
He was a tender age.

His pa was outside in the storm—
It blew up mighty quick.
It had been just a normal day
Until that snow got thick.

You couldn't see from here to there,
And dark was comin' on.
Ol’ Santa’d never make it here,
This Christmas Eve seemed gone.

Then he recalled that red-nosed deer—
The one they called Rudolph.
But that was meant for fog and such,
This snow would put him off.

Well, he’d forget Christmas this year,
And pray Pa was all right.
Just then he heard the barn door slam—
Pa stepped into the light.

He went to sleep that Christmas Eve
A tear rolled down his cheek.
He was warm and his folks were safe.
He felt quite calm and meek.

Next morn, he stumbled out of bed,
Slowly creeped down the stair,
The tree was lit and pies were baked,
Presents were ev'rywhere!

He learned of miracles just then,
And knew the story's true.
The Christmas Child has saved the world—
He came for me and you.

The thing ‘bout Santa puzzled him.
That storm sure was brewin,
But even in that blindin’ snow—
He knew what he was doin’!

December 2014
Edited 12/8/2019
Contest: Writing Challenge - December 2019 
Sponsor: Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode
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La France Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 8:06 AM
Larry congratulations on your win in my Christmas writing challenge with this wonderful poem.
Bradfield Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 10:58 AM
Thank you!
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December 1, 2016 at 6:21 PM
Congratulations on your win, Larry love the poem.. Hugs eve
Bradfield Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 9:43 PM
Thank you, Eve!...Larry
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December 1, 2016 at 2:40 AM
- A lovely Christmas poems, Larry - Congrats on your well deserved first place - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bradfield Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 10:27 AM
You are always very kind, Anne-Lise...Thank you..Larry
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November 30, 2016 at 7:13 PM
What a special form. Cowboy... I love your poem. Congratulations!
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December 1, 2016 at 11:34 AM
Thanks, I will most certainly check it out :)
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December 1, 2016 at 10:26 AM
Thank you Darren. Cowboy is what I do most of. It fits my youth and the language is natural to me. If you'd like to read more of the genre I recommend cowboypoetry.com
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