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A Confession

Something eats away at him buries the past, blurs the future grabs the soul and won’t let go But what is it, pray tell clinging to the bottom of his being… Caterwauling through dark alleys gunshots pierce hazy air madmen in rags sprawl on stoops of wear and tear… A confession crosses his parted lips the truth being – Does he even care to stop and smell what’s there or pause to pluck a red rose rare

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Date: 4/7/2024 8:15:00 AM
A powerful poem. Well written Gershon :)
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Date: 4/7/2024 5:56:00 AM
this was a deep and thought-provoking poem...made me think of how much I can focus on regrets and the past and fail to pause to see the beauty in the moment. Well said, Gershon. Faving. Have a splendid day, Sara
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/7/2024 8:01:00 PM
Whoa. Appreciate the fave, Sara. ~ Struggling away, Gershon
Date: 4/7/2024 1:20:00 AM
Gershon, something about this is deep and worthy of re-reading - first impressions are genuinely hypnotic. I guess we all have unconfessed secrets, hidden or perhaps forgotten so maybe a call to repentance.. Great poem this. Sam.
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Date: 4/7/2024 8:01:00 PM
Sure appreciate your complimentary comments on this, Sam. I'm just doin' my best to become relevant. Thank you so much, Gershon

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