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A Complex Subject - a Bit Bawdy

A humorous thing about sex when young ‘twas a subject complex we tried to get laid but left so dismayed when merriment early ejects. August 29, 2019

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/5/2019 2:35:00 PM

I'd always thought of those disappointed this way as either rejected or dejected. Now you've shown me that they're 'ejected.' LOL. Naughty one, John. :) gw

John Gondolf
Date: 9/5/2019 9:29:00 PM

Thanks Gershon, sometimes you just have to have fun with poetry. John

Pashang Salehi

Date: 9/3/2019 11:17:00 PM

Cute

John Gondolf
Date: 9/4/2019 4:04:00 AM

Thanks, Pashang.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/2/2019 8:34:00 AM

H John, a fun limerick which is both naughty and nice. Boys will be boys whatever the age. Hugs, Jennifer.

John Gondolf
Date: 9/2/2019 10:59:00 AM

When young sex was always such a mysterious subject surrounded by so much curiosity. If only we knew then what we know now. And maybe one of these days I will grow up...nah! Thank you for your thoughts my dear friend. Hugs, John

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/31/2019 12:23:00 AM

This had me laughing John. Sex is pretty much all young boys talk about! Loved it! xxoo

John Gondolf
Date: 8/31/2019 8:02:00 AM

Sometimes older boys too. Glad you enjoyed my humor, Connie. Hugs, John

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2019 6:32:00 PM

haha, GOOD one. Wish mine was that funny

John Gondolf
Date: 8/30/2019 10:23:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea, I appreciate it. John

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/30/2019 2:44:00 PM

Lol! John, A humorous take on sex Ed. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great weekend my friend:-) Alexis

John Gondolf
Date: 8/30/2019 3:03:00 PM

Thanks, Alexis, glad you got a laugh out of it. All the best my friend. Hugs, John

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/29/2019 1:58:00 PM

Your muse is being naughty my dear friend. Having some playful fun it seems. Your thoughts bring a smile and a blush, all at the same time. :) Brandy

John Gondolf
Date: 8/29/2019 3:30:00 PM

Thank you, Brandy.

Lu Loo

Date: 8/29/2019 1:53:00 PM

hahaahaha! awesome dear John :)-luloo

John Gondolf
Date: 8/29/2019 3:29:00 PM

Thank you, Luloo, I'm glad you got a laugh out of it. Hugs, John

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/29/2019 9:52:00 AM

Haha John this is a cracker. Good luck. Tom

John Gondolf
Date: 8/29/2019 10:20:00 AM

Thanks, Tom, glad you enjoyed it. John

Jan Allison

Date: 8/29/2019 9:44:00 AM

ha ha ha love it John, I too have a bawdy one to post, I will probably change my contest entry now especially since I've been told of a recent snide poem that 'people shouldn't write bawdy poems' well it's tough because I will never stop! (the poem was withdrawn not long after posting - but that is this childish poet's style) hugs Jan xx

John Gondolf
Date: 8/29/2019 10:15:00 AM

Thanks, Jan, glad you enjoyed it. We can all write serious poetry but sometimes you just have to lighten up and have fun with it. I think one of the reasons you have so many followers is that you make poetry fun, don't ever stop my friend. Hugs, John