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A Collaborated Love

(Bold print by James Edward Lee Sr.) Amber silents, daylight violets. I look and see you there in the garden; custom stares. Love comes here! Love is where there is caring faith; Love’s committed grace. And because I have had faith, I’ve found you in this lovely place.   Oh, how glad I am to see a chance we come together. I want for us to be writing this love letter, caressing rhymes; Not just for now but for all times!  Dear, shall we write together “letters” and “words”; To this, dear, you reply: O love of love lets us write nigh. And our words, like pretty birds, we will let fly into the garden of our love. Each word is precious like a dove. Come write with me, calvary so lets elaborate.   With heart filled with happiness, I reply: Shall we, yes we will collaborate. . . Enjoying the garden of our love verse is a beautiful fate. Sept 15, 2019 for Contest: Let Us Collaborate a Love Verse Form is rhyme but contest rules are to post this as free verse.

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Date: 10/30/2019 1:28:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your podium winning placement. Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/29/2019 5:56:00 PM
'Andrea, Congratulations on your win! Beautifully pulled off. Liked "caressing rhymes." David'
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Date: 10/29/2019 12:29:00 PM
Awesome! Congratulations, Andrea!
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Date: 9/22/2019 5:40:00 PM
You did this so well Andrea! Your lines combine with his beautifully. Best wishes for a high placement! : ) xxoo
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Date: 9/22/2019 5:13:00 PM
Two metrical mystics- two singers to run as the contest of Ice Skates & Blindfolds begun.
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Date: 9/20/2019 5:31:00 PM
This is a beautiful blending of two poets.
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Date: 9/20/2019 4:01:00 PM
Nice love poem collaboration! I have entered a love poetry contest recently! Keep 'em coming! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/20/2019 2:11:00 PM
This comes together so smoothly, should do very well in the contest, Andrea!
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Date: 9/20/2019 10:12:00 AM
Wow, you never disappoint Andrea, well written. Tom
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Date: 9/20/2019 7:41:00 AM
There is a rhythm and flow to your poem Andrea...verses from two poems blend so effortlessly..this is a sure winner.
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Date: 9/20/2019 4:33:00 AM
You did a great job... I truly hadn't a clue so just used his every line twice - so unsure of many things I do, but believe you have a winner. God bless
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