A Collaborated Love

(Bold print by James Edward Lee Sr.)

Amber silents, daylight violets.
I look and see you there
in the garden; custom stares.
Love comes here!
Love is where there is caring faith;
Love’s committed grace.
And because I have had faith,
I’ve found you in this lovely place.
 
Oh, how glad I am to see
a chance we come together.
I want for us to be
writing this love letter, caressing rhymes;
Not just for now but for all times!
 Dear, shall we write together “letters” and “words”;

To this, dear, you reply:
O love of love lets us write nigh.
And our words, like pretty birds, we will let fly
into the garden of our love.
Each word is precious like a dove.
Come write with me, calvary so lets elaborate.
 
With heart filled with happiness, I reply:
Shall we, yes we will collaborate. . .
Enjoying the garden of our love verse
is a beautiful fate.

Sept  15, 2019 for Contest: Let Us Collaborate a Love Verse
Form is rhyme but contest rules are to post this as free verse.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 10/30/2019 1:28:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your podium winning placement. Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/29/2019 5:56:00 PM
'Andrea, Congratulations on your win! Beautifully pulled off. Liked "caressing rhymes." David'
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Date: 10/29/2019 12:29:00 PM
Awesome! Congratulations, Andrea!
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Date: 9/22/2019 5:40:00 PM
You did this so well Andrea! Your lines combine with his beautifully. Best wishes for a high placement! : ) xxoo
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Date: 9/22/2019 5:13:00 PM
Two metrical mystics- two singers to run as the contest of Ice Skates & Blindfolds begun.
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Date: 9/20/2019 5:31:00 PM
This is a beautiful blending of two poets.
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Date: 9/20/2019 4:01:00 PM
Nice love poem collaboration! I have entered a love poetry contest recently! Keep 'em coming! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/20/2019 2:11:00 PM
This comes together so smoothly, should do very well in the contest, Andrea!
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Date: 9/20/2019 10:12:00 AM
Wow, you never disappoint Andrea, well written. Tom
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Date: 9/20/2019 7:41:00 AM
There is a rhythm and flow to your poem Andrea...verses from two poems blend so effortlessly..this is a sure winner.
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Date: 9/20/2019 4:33:00 AM
You did a great job... I truly hadn't a clue so just used his every line twice - so unsure of many things I do, but believe you have a winner. God bless
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