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A Cloud, of the Number Nine

The number nine, when said, is a bright red! Such a ruby gleam! As pleasant as a red rose that holds the morning's raindrops that will then slide silently off its petals, within the bushes planted by a child of nine years. On a lake a godly muse- nine sails, that glide, hushed, under the evening sky's blood that slowly seeps into "number nine" clouds that are bursting clots. Or they are dyed-saffron carnations, worn with a kiss... of a night walker's lips. For the "A Time for Nine" contest. May 16, 2021

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Date: 5/21/2021 6:43:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win, hugs Jan x
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Date: 5/20/2021 11:12:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... so delightful and delighting, especially the last two lines. God bless you.
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Date: 5/20/2021 6:19:00 PM
Such a pretty poem...Congrats on your win Jennifer :)
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Date: 5/20/2021 11:06:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 5/20/2021 10:55:00 AM
Hi Jennifer, I just love your opening line, it grabbed my attention, and the rest transported me to a serene lake at sunset, this is all so vivid, congratulations and thank you for entering my contest!
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