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A Close Encounter

Self-awareness on a pedestal, stalled by a stormy day, placed there by providence —by poet A Close Encounter car window reflected a close encounter. iridescent feathers folded; downpour. in blue cape, he hides his eyes, blue-green. we squeak past the blue trash can, he’s atop. so close, my husband doesn’t see him there, but the passenger, me, “Look a peacock!” was on my way to get my procedure. a sign, perhaps; hope that I’d be okay. had harried weekend, ups and downs, distract. i thanked the Lord, smiled, a calming effect.

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Date: 5/31/2025 3:35:00 PM
I am hoping you get well soon too! I hope that sweet sign was for you.
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Paige Hind
Date: 5/31/2025 8:09:00 PM
That's wonderful, Kim. I pray you keep that way. <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2025 4:17:00 PM
Thank you! Took a very slow walk today. So far so good :)
Date: 5/30/2025 11:58:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your write. Glad you are OK. Feel better fast. Have a blessed day writing away............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/30/2025 12:30:00 PM
Thank you! So far doing the trick! Tomorrow, I will give my leg a walk and see. If it will last long, I don’t know..hope so! I will try my hand at water aerobics, but carefully!
Date: 5/30/2025 4:54:00 AM
Good one. Happy to see the peacock was there at exactly the right time. Hope your procedure did go well.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/30/2025 7:36:00 AM
So far so good! Felt high as a kite yesterday. Got up at 4 am! napped for an hour. had coffee. lol. Thank you for your comment, my wonderful friend!

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