A Cinderella Love

For one enchanted night, I was Cinderella at the ball.
No fairy godmother did I have
to fashion for me a fancy gown
or to see me off that night in a golden carriage,
and yet I knew . . .
at last there had arrived all that I’d ever longed for.

The young man of my dreams appeared as if by magic
the week before I turned seventeen.
I was working in the lowly job of convenience store cashier
when I saw beyond me, his warm, chocolate eyes
flirting with me!
I sneaked peeks at him from my station at the cash register,
watching him as he was sneaking peeks at me!
There he stood near the frozen foods aisle -the handsome Canadian
who would soon reveal to me in conversation
a beautifully sexy French accent.

As we chatted, I imagined myself a Cinderella
who had been missing her other glass slipper.
At last my prince had arrived!
What joy flooded my spirit when by the end of the week,
he placed that coveted glass slipper on my foot,
for I was the girl he chose among all the others he had met
in his brief stay in my city
to be with him before he went away.

The stuff of fairy tales does not compare
to what ensued when my tall, dark, handsome prince
asked me out on a date that last weekend of August.
Summer winked goodbye right before my September birthday,
and in the most indelible sweet summer ending 
of all my youth,
I was Cinderella as my prince most charming asked,
“Will you be mine?”

Jan. 8, 2022 for the Be Mine Poetry Contest of Regina McIntosh
March 16, 2022 for A Brian Strand 1090 Poetry Contest
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Alex Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 10:05 PM
"As we chatted, I imagined myself a Cinderella who had been missing her other glass slipper" - beautiful experience. Narrated nicely. Congratulations!
Agustin Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 3:34 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Alex Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 6:57 AM
"I was Cinderella as my prince most charming asked, “Will you be mine?” - Indeed, a Cinderella Love, yet true. Congratulations!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 6:55 AM
Andrea, I am happy to see this gem take a high placement in Gina’s contest. Back to offer my congrats. blessings xxoo
Mcintosh Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 3:58 AM
Simply beautiful. I love it. Congrats and God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
Cheney Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 8:10 AM
May you never lose your glass slipper or your prince charming.
Daniel Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 11:57 PM
A lovely story of young romance, Andrea, I love the story of Cinderella and loved your poem too, it has all the elements of a fantastical magic fairy-tale:)
Krutsinger Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 11:41 PM
This is a dream come true, happily ever after story, Andrea. Wow!
Dietrich Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 3:59 PM
not really but it was nice while it lasted!
Watt Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 11:01 PM
A true sweet-sixteen fairy tale come true! I always love the romantic way you weave your accounts of young love. I love your line 'Summer winked goodbye' and your allusion to the Cinderella story (with a happier ending than Cinder Girl).
Dietrich Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 3:57 PM
thanks, John, hard to imagine that most of my love poems from my youth center around this ONE short period of time!!!
Daub Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 10:58 AM
I too met a prince charming that seemed perfect at the age of 17. Unfortunately , he turned out to be gay! We are still friends today but he is married to Steve and I am married to Wayne. Very well done, good luck in the contest! Grace D
Inman Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 8:45 AM
A dream that never dies.
Proxenos Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 5:09 AM
A lovely fairy tale my friend and a real fairy tale ending - young love so romantic, so enthralling and it always seems that you are the only one who has found true everlasting love. You describe your young Summer love so deliciously! Hugs and blessings dear friend, Jennifer.
Zahid Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 4:32 AM
Aah such a lovely, sweet poem. Great memories
Pandit Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 6:01 AM
Sweet Cinderella love story, Andrea. I feel the joy still exuding through your words.
Skelly Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 4:15 AM
Very nice retro look at the start of a love story...Delice
Cunningham Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 3:10 AM
You never forget those happy times of your youth Andrea. Tom
Buhagiar Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 1:06 AM
Who has not met someone of his dreams in his youth. I have an unposted poem on it but it is too sad to post in these festive days. Hugs.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 11:59 PM
I love the telling of this story Andrea. I too met someone when I was 17 in the supermarket. I wrote about it recently. We never forget those times when someone makes us feel so special no matter how many years go by. I think Gina will love this too. Blessings xxoo
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