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A Christmas Snow

Bundled in goose down like their feathered friends;
they plump outside for they've no wish to stay in;
they dive in the snow, the mundane to transcend.
 
Boys howl and they whistle and the girls defend
igloos of snow bricks with rosy cheeks and chins,
bundled in goose down like their feathered friends.

Small toddlers fall boom, make angels and pretend
that the snowflakes are food, as their silly faces grin;
they dive in the snow the mundane to transcend.

Snow geese honk and a large flock descends,
roaring with laughter the children rush in,
bundled in goose down like their feathered friends.

Mother lights the Christmas tree on the bend
and Father grabs a scarf and joins the din.
They dive in the snow, the mundane to transcend.

Snowballs zoom, as sisters and brothers contend
even the pooch prances (for of course he is kin).
Bundled in goose down like their feathered friends,
they dive in the snow the mundane to transcend.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 4:51 PM
Thank you for the very nice, nice reply to my old comment, Debbie. You are so sweet... :):) I enjoy supporting all poets... LINDA
Jones Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 2:01 PM
These words just dance and come alive..you always make it seem easy Debbie....what a pro! Enjoyed....:-)
May Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 1:00 PM
Wonderful write Debbie....thanks for the visit...Have a Happy New Year.....
Lamoureux Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 8:51 AM
I enjoyed rereading this beauty. Happy New Year Debbie.
A   Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 9:04 PM
NICE WIN.. DG...LINDA
Guzzi Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 9:08 PM
Thank you Linda
A   Avatar
December 25, 2014 at 9:57 PM
I like it and I like it and I like it, hope you are having the time of your life... Enjoy your days and the coming New Year. Love ~LINDA~
Andresen Avatar
December 23, 2014 at 5:27 AM
- Dear Debbie, so beautiful written !!! - I wish you and your family a beautiful Christmas - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 11:02 PM
This is first place all the way, Debbie! Really fantastic imagery and in a difficult form that you do so well. Congrats and I hope you're enjoying your visit in the city of light. Merry Christmas...hugs, Rhonda
Yvonne Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 8:20 AM
There is snow business like snow business. Congratulations on your win.
Yvonne Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 8:18 AM
If I didn't know better I would think I was rubbing off on you (unintentional sexual pun). As you know the child in me is my calling card. However I know you already own a very light joyful touch to your nature not always recognized by everyone. A Fav. love you!
Deschler Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 1:10 AM
This poem brings back so many fond childhood memories... A lovely write, Debbie. Congrats on your win!... I do appreciate your kind congrats and comments. Thank you so much!
Kiser Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 2:13 PM
Those were the days, weren't they? I remember making show angels, as a kid; such fun. Thanks for the memory.
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 9:31 PM
Your poem was so much fun Debbie. It kept me smiling till the end. Congratulations on your win.
Bateson Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 11:40 AM
Brings back memories of the past. Lovely..
Oule Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 3:37 AM
Elegant and elegant Christmas is my rebirth too Well written theme Bryan Loves..xoxo
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 7:41 PM
This was delightful to read. It took me there Debbie. Congratulations!#7
Allison Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 12:43 PM
a delight to read Debbie - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Devnath  Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 7:34 AM
Hurry Up! no time to wait for that moment. A sweet Merry Christmas it's. Lovely worded my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
A. Sharma Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 3:30 AM
Wonderful imagery n a delightful read,, tough form ,, congrats on fine win Debbie!
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 10:10 AM
Congratulations on placing with this wonderful Villanelle.
Hamilton Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 1:28 AM
great villanelle Debbie surprised it was not placed much higher. Not any easy form. Yet you have done it with a-plume good rhyme, rhymth and meter. hugs
Mehta Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 8:55 PM
Beautiful imagery and well crafted, congrats on the win, Deb. Light and Love
Mcintosh Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 8:52 PM
I love this and May God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
Haight Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 8:34 PM
Debbie, congratulations on your win for this lovely poem. So many images that bring back memories! Sandra
Macmillan Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 5:34 PM
In an effort to keep Soup etiquette, I am only going to say this is truly beautiful and its language so good... plump, a noun used as a verb, all those kids so "Charlie Brownish" in their layers of snowsuits. Yup. They plump, indeed. Now, if I were not to be up on soup etiquette, you darn well know what I'd say... ;).... MHAH
Guzzi Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 7:46 PM
yup hmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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