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A Christmas Snow

Nervous as a harried hen, Mom was in a dither Would wedding guests be kept away by December weather? My cheeks so rosy from the sting of howling, bitter winds White lace and pearls, car door opened and a young girl stepped within Fresh mums adorned the altar of “Our Lady by the Sea” Blue bridesmaid angels led the way; John waited lovingly Vows exchanged as God smiled down, crystal kisses danced in air The reception band played merrily, all invited were there Many guests remarked they’d never seen a happier bride At midnight on Christmas Eve John took my hand; we ventured outside Snow drifts piled ‘round the cars, Christmas Nor’ Easter just ending My mate high on love (and champagne), wheels on highway spinning Pulling into a gas station, trying to get a grip Still in my bridal gown as the dipping temperatures nipped The station attendant ran out and smiled, he’d seen us reel But we were laughing and trading places behind the wheel My tipsy spouse in a tux, truly a sight to behold When we reached our new home, I carried HIM o’er the threshold
*For an Angel's contest!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/6/2015 6:46:00 PM
Ok this time I am going to agree with Rhonda and fav this one too. Congratulations on your win.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 1/6/2015 6:48:00 PM
Belated Congratulations I should of said!
Date: 12/22/2014 12:29:00 AM
Wonderful memories penned, Carolyn! This is by far the sweetest poem on the winner's list. A fav for me! Merry Christmas and blessings in the new year...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/19/2014 1:50:00 PM
Great story and perfect pen Carolyn, a great effort! Always, Keith :-)
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Date: 12/13/2014 8:14:00 PM
Such a wonderful story Sandra. I can imagine how beautiful it was. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/13/2014 5:28:00 PM
Oh, Carolyn, I love this !! Is it based on a true Christmas wedding.....??? (perhaps your own). So many of my friends and family have chosen this favorite time of year for their weddings! (My husband and I were married Thanksgiving weekend....kind of close, but not the same!) Well done !!
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Date: 12/13/2014 2:16:00 AM
a white wedding lovely Carolyn congrats on win have a great festive hol hugs
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Date: 12/12/2014 8:42:00 PM
Very sweet poem on the snow, congratulations on the win, Carolyn
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Date: 12/12/2014 8:07:00 PM
Yes, I'm with Bob what a great memory Congrad's on your win. Happy Holidays Light & Love
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Date: 12/6/2014 10:32:00 AM
What a wonderful memory to have on your wedding day. A very fine write my friend! Good luck in the contest...
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Date: 12/2/2014 10:28:00 PM
well you know that old expression, "A good cook should always carry her groom over the threshold, cause after 20 years of cooking, that wont be possible anymore!" Ok I made that up :) Loved this poem, both Christmasy and so romantic as well!!
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Date: 12/2/2014 10:08:00 PM
Fantastic write Carolyn! U paint with magical words my friend! gl in contest!
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Date: 12/2/2014 3:57:00 PM
I wish I knew you and your John back then sweet lady.I can imagine all this scenery,your treasured moments..Your laughter ..your sound of happiness.Our angels are always with us protecting us dear..and so your dear John. Outstanding like you! btw-thanks for your.lovely Christmas card.Love the bird.. And mine is on its way very soon : ) : ).love you sis
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 12/2/2014 3:58:00 PM
Was so happy when i saw who sent the card.Its my first : ) xx

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