Beautiful Scars Poet Quatrain

A Christmas Memory-Contest

Matching pj's, rainbow colored tinsel with LED lights,
                 Gazing, disbelief as the pine slowly declines onto the floor,
                       We all laugh with silliness while grammy has fallen beneath it,
                             There the tree lies while the naughty kitty chaotically explores.


Written By: Laura Urbaniak
Date: November 20, 2015
For the contest, A Christmas Memory, sponsor, Broken Wings

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Eve Roper December 4, 2015 at 6:06 PM Oh so funny, Laura, congratulations on your win!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores December 2, 2015 at 12:54 PM Congratulations Laura. Beautiful Scars December 2, 2015 at 2:04 PM Thanks Nayda :)-lu *smiles*

Dan Cwiak December 1, 2015 at 4:22 PM Reminds me of a Christmas memory I only speculated about, and will have to find. Congrats on the win, Laura. Gave me a smile. Beautiful Scars December 1, 2015 at 5:31 PM Thank you Dan :) *smiles*

Andrea Dietrich December 1, 2015 at 3:46 PM haha, reminds me of Grandma got run over by a reindeer kind of tale. Congrats with your humorous little memory. Beautiful Scars December 1, 2015 at 5:30 PM Thanks Andrea :) *smiles*

Skat A December 1, 2015 at 1:09 PM Laura, Congratulations on your Christmas Memory win. Luv **SKAT** Beautiful Scars December 1, 2015 at 1:30 PM Thank you very much SKAT :)-lu

Jan Allison December 1, 2015 at 12:39 PM Dropping back with my congrats Laura:-) hugs Jan xx Beautiful Scars December 1, 2015 at 1:29 PM Thank you again Jan:)-lu *smiles*

Anne-Lise Andresen December 1, 2015 at 11:53 AM - It is rare that I participate in anyone contest ...... however, this was so nice - Many great and some sad memories we shared - Congratulations with your poems, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Beautiful Scars December 1, 2015 at 1:29 PM Thank you Anne Lise :) I appreciate your kind review:) -lu *smiles*

Anisha Dutta December 1, 2015 at 8:17 AM Congrats Laura for the placement. AnishaD Beautiful Scars December 1, 2015 at 1:28 PM Thank you Anisha :)-lu *smiles*

Balveen Cheema December 1, 2015 at 3:39 AM So it was the cat that was celebrating!! Congrats Laura on your placement! Beautiful Scars December 1, 2015 at 12:28 PM Yes! that darn cat had the last laugh! And poor grammy! But she was perfectly fine, no broken hip! *Smiles*-lu

Viv Wigley December 1, 2015 at 1:46 AM You can't beat a Christmas happy disaster, Laura. Well done. Viv x Beautiful Scars December 1, 2015 at 12:27 PM Thanks Viv, it was hilarious :) -lu *Smiles*

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 30, 2015 at 11:48 PM Lovely memory with so much humour.. beautifully penned Laura.. congrats on big win! Beautiful Scars December 1, 2015 at 12:26 PM It was very funny! Thanks -lu *smiles*

Anne-Lise Andresen November 21, 2015 at 1:57 PM - Fun, Christmas memory :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) .... Luck in contest ! Beautiful Scars November 21, 2015 at 4:06 PM Thank you very much Anne Lise :)-*smiles*

Jan Allison November 20, 2015 at 11:42 AM This charming poem will place well - Broken Wings loves cats - great write Laura:-) good luck:-) hugs Jan xx Beautiful Scars November 20, 2015 at 1:05 PM Thank you Jan very much :) Have a great day!

Connie Marcum Wong November 20, 2015 at 11:26 AM This poem is so charming. I love cats and the photo included inhances your words wonderfully! I hope to see this on the winner's list! I think it is a great entry! Beautiful Scars November 20, 2015 at 1:05 PM Thank you Connie!! :) -lu xx *smiles*