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Bright pink Apollo Candy bike her smile as wide as handlebars with new found freedom my young tyke laughed as she tried to race the cars Viv Wigley 25th November 2015 For contest 'A Christmas memory', sponsored by Broken Wings

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Date: 12/25/2015 9:48:00 PM
Viv, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/18/2015 12:14:00 AM
Brilliant! and the illustration is priceless!!! '...her smile as wide as handlebars,' Go tyke! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/18/2015 12:54:00 AM
Thanks, Keith, a nice memory. Seems a lifetime ago. Regards, Viv
Date: 12/4/2015 2:41:00 PM
Such a great memory to hold on to, Viv. I enjoyed this very much. Congrats on your nice win. Sandra
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Date: 12/5/2015 1:32:00 AM
Christmas and children- fount of most memories, I think. Thanks for kindly dropping by, Sandra. Viv x
Date: 12/3/2015 4:14:00 AM
Very nice!
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Date: 12/5/2015 1:31:00 AM
Thanks, Julia, hope you're well, Viv x
Date: 12/2/2015 1:01:00 PM
Congratulations Viv.
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Date: 12/1/2015 10:55:00 PM
Wonderful write, Viv, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/2/2015 12:17:00 AM
Thanks Eve, great writes all round, don't you agree? Viv x
Date: 12/1/2015 8:19:00 PM
I enjoy this uplifting and joyous poem about an equally joyous memory! Congratulations on your win ... CayCay
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Date: 12/2/2015 12:18:00 AM
Yes, CayCay, those happy snapshots of innocent glee, long past. Thanks for stopping by. Viv x
Date: 12/1/2015 5:17:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this treasured memory with us Viv - Lindsay
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Date: 12/2/2015 12:18:00 AM
My pleasure, matey, hope you're well.Regards, Viv
Date: 12/1/2015 4:27:00 PM
Love this Viv congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/2/2015 12:19:00 AM
Thanks Michael, a good contest. Regards, Viv
Date: 12/1/2015 3:51:00 PM
Such a sweet memory, Viv! Love the 2nd line:) Congratulations on this podium finish, my friend. Regards // paul
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Date: 12/2/2015 12:20:00 AM
Thanks Paul, one of those memories that never dimmed with time. Which is nice. Regards, Viv
Date: 12/1/2015 3:35:00 PM
Wonderful write, Viv. I hope she beat those cars once in a while. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 12/2/2015 12:20:00 AM
She does now she drives one, Dan. Fortunately her steering has improved. And braking. Regards, Viv
Date: 12/1/2015 3:24:00 PM
big congrats, and yes, MINE belongs on Twilight zone!!
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Date: 12/2/2015 12:21:00 AM
Can't wait- doo doo doo doo, doo doo doo doo........ x
Date: 12/1/2015 1:07:00 PM
Viv, Congratulations on your Christmas Memory win. Luv **SKAT**
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Date: 12/2/2015 12:21:00 AM
Thanks Skat, hope you're ticketty-boo, Viv x
Date: 12/1/2015 12:07:00 PM
- It is rare that I participate in anyone contest ...... however, this was so nice - Many great and some sad memories we shared - Congratulations with your sweet poem, Viv :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/2/2015 12:22:00 AM
Loveely to see you joining in, Anne Lise, a pleasant surprise. Viv x
Date: 12/1/2015 11:15:00 AM
This poem is light and refreshing, leaving the reader entertained and wearing a smile. Emile.
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Date: 12/2/2015 12:22:00 AM
Thanks Emile, glad that it hit the spot. Regards, Viv
Date: 12/1/2015 3:31:00 AM
How shweet! Is that her pic Viv? Congrats on your placement!
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Date: 12/2/2015 12:23:00 AM
Not her pic, but almost identical, Balveen. Thanks for dropping by. Regards, Viv
Date: 12/1/2015 2:02:00 AM
Lovely poem and memory! Congrats on the contest! Made me smile.
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Date: 12/1/2015 2:09:00 AM
Thanks Susan, appreciate you stopping by. Viv x
Date: 12/1/2015 1:47:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Mr Viv:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/1/2015 1:49:00 AM
Thanks, Jan, stop sending us this miserable weather from your direction x
Date: 11/30/2015 11:34:00 PM
Ah a sweet memory so beautifully penned Viv.. congrats on big win!
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Date: 12/1/2015 12:50:00 AM
Thanks, Dr Upma, appreciate your visit, as always, Viv x
Date: 11/30/2015 2:15:00 PM
A great Christmas memory. a bike always makes a great gift.
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Date: 12/1/2015 12:51:00 AM
Yes, njeri, but on Christmas day morning it isn't safe to venture out around here, it's like an amateur racetrack. Viv x
Date: 11/29/2015 6:17:00 PM
this is FANTASTIC. Wish mine could have been as simply put.
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Date: 12/1/2015 12:58:00 AM
Miine was a fleeting memory, so I could get away with simple. Yours, Andrea ,actually could warrant an episode of the 'Twilight Zone'- I wouldn't wish it on anybody. Viv x
Date: 11/25/2015 8:40:00 PM
Delightful Viv! especially with the illustration. Slickly rhymed with a pleasing flow! Well done my friend. Best wishes, Keith 7
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Date: 11/25/2015 11:33:00 PM
Thanks, Keith, I'm glad you liked it. Regards, Viv
Date: 11/25/2015 6:53:00 AM
Viv, I've never tried to ride a bike but i still hope to try one day... =`) i enjoyed your poem!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 11/25/2015 7:42:00 AM
Find a good teacher, Olive- I taught my daughter to ride without stabilisers on her bike in an afternoon, but ended up with crippling backache for a month. The things we do for love, eh? Viv x
Date: 11/25/2015 5:54:00 AM
You made me feel all warm inside, Viv. Well done!
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Date: 11/25/2015 7:41:00 AM
Glad to hear you caught my cheer, James, thanks for dropping by. Regards, Viv
Date: 11/25/2015 4:32:00 AM
absolutely charming memory Viv:-) - love the imagery of her smile :-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/25/2015 7:40:00 AM
Thanks, Jan, I omitted that when she went to our local bike shop (remember Samways?) she tried it out in the car park of the shop and crashed into the side of their van. A great start. Viv x

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