A Christmas Memory

A Christmas Memory


           A mature lady submerged in a Christmas Eve flashback,
           A little school girl on a pastoral school stage setup,
           Spectators many...playing a role of a shepherd,gazing
           at her doll as baby Jesus cuddled in Mother Mary's arms.





         Rizwana Bhurani.
         22.11.2015
         Contest:A Christmas Memory
         Sponsor:Broken Wings

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Date: 12/3/2015 10:46:00 PM
Thnk you.....best wishes
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Date: 12/2/2015 12:57:00 PM
Congratulations Rizwana.
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Date: 12/2/2015 4:50:00 AM
Thnk you SIR...regards
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Date: 12/1/2015 4:05:00 PM
Wonderful memory and win. Well deserved one, Rizwana.
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 12/2/2015 4:54:00 AM
Thnk you for your wonderful comment....regards
Date: 12/1/2015 3:48:00 PM
a very sweet memory. Congrats in the contest.
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 12/2/2015 4:55:00 AM
Thnk you...regards
Date: 12/1/2015 1:08:00 PM
Rizwana, Congratulations on your Christmas Memory win. Luv **SKAT**
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 12/2/2015 4:55:00 AM
Thnk you...regards
Date: 12/1/2015 12:33:00 PM
A lovely memory Rizwana:-) hugs Jan xx
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 12/2/2015 4:56:00 AM
Thnk you so much...regards
Date: 12/1/2015 11:59:00 AM
- It is rare that I participate in anyone contest ...... however, this was so nice - Many great and some sad memories we shared - Congratulations with your poems, Rizwana :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/1/2015 4:15:00 AM
How cute-eyeing your doll! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/1/2015 1:42:00 AM
A lovely memory, Rizwana, and didn't end like my play (see my poem 'Nativity play'). Well done. Viv x
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 12/2/2015 4:57:00 AM
Thnk you......for sure I ll read your poem......regards
Date: 11/30/2015 11:42:00 PM
Lovely memory so beautifully penned Rizwana... congrats on big win!
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 12/2/2015 4:59:00 AM
Thnk you so much...... Tipster or dipster...for all sweet DOC is always there to cheer.....regards
Date: 11/28/2015 11:37:00 AM
- A sweet and lovely Christmas memory, Rizwana - Luck in the contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/23/2015 7:43:00 AM
What a very lovely Christmas memory - so nostalgic! A delightful write! Good luck in the contest, Rizwana! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 11/23/2015 8:33:00 PM
your comments as beautiful as your poems...thnk you
Date: 11/22/2015 5:10:00 PM
Sweet memory, Rizwana, nicely expressed. I was part of a Nativity scene too once in school many years ago. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 11/23/2015 8:36:00 PM
Glad you could relate to it....thank you...m a recent entry...will feel honoured to be corrected by talented poets like you.
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