Brian Strand Poet Alliteration

A Christian Confession

Confession,in constant conversation 
            into the ears of my Saviour

Concern,compassion,comfort
             by covenant with my God

Commitment in curative care
             from the hands of my Helper

Communion,in candid counsel
              in the words of my Lord

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Beata Agustin September 30, 2020 at 9:19 PM Congrats. Thanks for sharing this, poetically expressing your vibrant relationship with the Lord. I'm likewise honoured and humbled for your participation, since I consider you a mentor in my poetry endeavours. God bless you. Brian Strand September 30, 2020 at 10:22 PM Thanks Beata,as I said to Sam,the form has a special place as the trigger the Lord used to start me exploring this gifting and then( in due time) to use it to fulfil His purposes here in the worldwide workshop that is PS.Stay creative

Sam Kauffman September 29, 2020 at 12:04 PM There are so many wonderful and profound thoughts in your succinct lines, Brian. We are so blessed to live a life of covenant with our Lord and know we can have a "constant conversation" in "communion" of a "candid counsel." Why do we try to hide our skeletons? Congratulations on your win. Blessings! Brian Strand September 29, 2020 at 12:40 PM My first poem Sam,was an alliterarion so has a special place,it was also a Christian topic.

Linda Alice Fowler September 29, 2020 at 8:26 AM Moving read Brian. Congratulations on the win! Linda Brian Strand September 29, 2020 at 12:37 PM Thanks Linda.

Arturo Michael August 26, 2020 at 8:36 AM I like it...it's peaceful Brian Strand August 26, 2020 at 10:20 AM Cheers Arturo